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posted November 14, 2004 03:43 PM         

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Tonight I'm all alone
But I'm not afraid
Because I'm thinking about you
I'm not lonely
Because I'm thinking about you
Even the dark can't frighten me
All because of you
Our reunion is coming soon
And I'm counting down the days
Do you realise how much I love you?
Like someone said
'I truly, madly, deeply do'
I think about you
All the time
How you occupy my mind
As if I'm obsessed
Am I going out of my mind?
As if I'm possessed

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posted November 14, 2004 10:13 PM         

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posted November 15, 2004 05:34 PM         

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I should re-write this poem.

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posted November 16, 2004 07:39 AM         

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Hey Eternal ~ I don't think so. It reads like it was channelled by emotion. It's perfect as it is - unless you want to modify it for yourself of course!

~* It's like a love spell *~

The way the emotion weaves.

Clutching the symbolic pentagram, a young witch
stands beneath a twisted tree under a waning moon,
preparing to weave her spells upon the night.

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posted November 16, 2004 03:05 PM         

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Thanks Sheaa- but I'm still going to re-write this one. I'll take certain part from this piece, re-entitle the new poem and make it a new post. This one sounds mediocre.

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