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Topic: NeoStars pOetic Adventures
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neostar
Knowflake Posts: 134
From: Vic. Australia
Registered: Nov 2004
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posted November 25, 2004 10:02 PM
 
I made this thread keep a history of poems I write.
I don't think I am that skilled yet, but the main thing is that I enjoy it, and being abit unsure of myself, it's nice to get a comment here or there.
Anyhoo, Here's my first one:=============================================
Coming Home
Twinkle twinkle little star,
I hear saturns symphony from afar,
A cosmic carousel,
A timeless treasure,
O, tell me saturn,
I can't wait forever. Saturn's wave of karmic thunder,
the thunderbolt path takes me under,
The fairy tale ends,
A new path opens,
No more beginnings,
And no more ends. Our holy trinity now complete,
Once our Unity comprehendeth defeat,
O, once fallen,
And, now we see
The only way home,
Is to just BE! - Daphne 11/2004
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Randall
Webmaster Posts: 19979
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted November 26, 2004 01:21 PM
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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
26taurus
Moderator Posts: 3705
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 27, 2004 02:12 PM
neostar,You are VERY 'skilled'! I loved that!! Please share more of your adventures.  "Life is either a daring adventure or nothing."
--Helen Keller ------------------
"We don't see things as they are...we see things as we are".
-Anais Nin IP: Logged |
neostar
Knowflake Posts: 134
From: Vic. Australia
Registered: Nov 2004
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posted November 28, 2004 06:03 PM
Thank-U, that's so encouraging!!
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Randall
Webmaster Posts: 19979
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted December 07, 2004 01:03 PM
*bump*------------------
"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
neostar
Knowflake Posts: 134
From: Vic. Australia
Registered: Nov 2004
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posted December 07, 2004 05:35 PM
I might post some more tonight 
I've been so busy and so stressed lately! 
Thanks for reminding me of this Randall, I think I need to relax tonight and write some.  IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 19979
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted December 08, 2004 09:37 AM
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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
neostar
Knowflake Posts: 134
From: Vic. Australia
Registered: Nov 2004
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posted December 08, 2004 07:28 PM
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DirectionologyHow can we be blamed
for our pathetic ways, we are ashamed
when we could just open our eyes and see
there's an interactive world out there
for you and me Listen to the sounds of the earth
the eternal harmony since birth
forever ours to capture
is it hard to find? it is surely not in front
could it really be behind?
Left like a shadow aeons ago
imprinted in words numbers and nature
how easy it is to see
for those who open the hearts
and begin to fly free How complicated we get
because we cannot just forget
the illusion we created
of superficial happiness
we will soon regret slowly, slowly, one by one
we remember the peace felt by each
when we were one
O, the storm inside, as the grief resides
waitingly, patiently,I will be. -Daphne 12/2004
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future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 267
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted December 08, 2004 09:28 PM
These are beautiful, NeoStar! I look forward to reading more of your works!IP: Logged |
neostar
Knowflake Posts: 134
From: Vic. Australia
Registered: Nov 2004
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posted December 09, 2004 06:17 PM
Thank-YOU future,
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26taurus
Moderator Posts: 3705
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted December 10, 2004 04:35 AM
Wow neo  . That was really beautiful. I especially liked these parts: quote:
Listen to the sounds of the earth
the eternal harmony since birth
forever ours to capture
is it hard to find?
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slowly, slowly, one by one
we remember the peace felt by each
when we were one
Well done.
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Sheaa Olein
Moderator Posts: 1539
From: Over here! (UK)
Registered: Jul 2004
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posted December 10, 2004 10:12 PM
neostar / NeoKitty, I love them!! So very true  You're naturally apt at rhyme and meter. I look forward to reading more of your poetic adventures  IP: Logged |
NeoKitty
Knowflake Posts: 112
From: Heaven
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted December 11, 2004 01:53 AM
That means alot- thank-you angels!------------------
*Formally known as NeoStar
======================== O space and time! now I see it is true, what I guess'd at,
What I guess'd when I loaf'd on the grass,
What I guess'd while I lay alone in my bed,
And again as I walk'd the beach under the paling stars of the morning.* * From Song Of Myself by Walt Whitman IP: Logged |
NeoKitty
Knowflake Posts: 112
From: Heaven
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted December 15, 2004 09:52 PM
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Untilted- by anonymous  "O, stars swirling through me,
Night sky exploding,
I grope at Infinite reminders
of awesome unknowing.
Above, within, below,
I inhabit an ocean of universes--
Acquaintances I cannot fathom
So god in her aloneness can gasp, weep, tremble and laugh.
And god in unity must not leave me separate
swooning forever in this "I" "thou" reflection
So just for now,
I will be god's joy, smallness and agony,
Just for now she plays me
Until she dreams another dream."
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