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posted December 25, 2004 10:22 AM         

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deeper...
lets go deeper...
i see your eyes
how they glow
when i say i can relate...
then a thoughtless moment
again you go into a shell..

deeper..
lets go deeper..
where there's no fear of hurt..
extreme..
did u say so?
how wonderful i know you
that tender heart
that passion gently hidden
with the least effort
our souls merged...

naked..
lets be naked...
with one soul
lets travel
to lives yet to come..

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From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted December 25, 2004 11:45 PM         

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Lovely!

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From: MAINE! :)
Registered: Aug 2003

posted December 25, 2004 11:56 PM         

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Air sign trying to break a water sign? That's what I'm feelin'...

Very nice.

Ghani

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posted December 27, 2004 12:05 AM         

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Oh.! Thanks Future uncertain,Ghani
It was a bold step to post here among such talented knownflakes
Ghani, its an air sign(with water moon) trying to fan a fire sign

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From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted December 27, 2004 01:55 AM         

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Just more talent to add to the charm of this place, darlin'! I really liked this!

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posted December 27, 2004 03:42 AM         

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pixelpixie..!!
WOW did u say that??
I am on cloud no 9
(An admirer of ur poems )

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From: Ontario, Canada
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posted December 27, 2004 11:21 AM         

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Really?
*up on that cloud with ya'!!!!*
Well thanks sweetlibra!!!

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From: Over here! (UK)
Registered: Jul 2004

posted December 27, 2004 06:45 PM         

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It reminded me of a cancer moon! Only because I tend to go into my shell at certain times

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then a thoughtless moment
again you go into a shell..

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Beautiful sweetlibra

{{{future, Ghani & pix, stopped by for a quick hug }}}

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From: Colorful Colorado
Registered: Aug 2003

posted December 28, 2004 04:22 PM         

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Mind if Deep adds to deeper?

Life is as Life is Lived

So live life long
and sing a song
make your music beautiful
and may you know that

Meaning is as Meaning is Lived.

Let us endevor
to live forever
in the generation's hearts
long to come

Randall III

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posted December 29, 2004 11:32 AM         

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Hugs Sheea
welcome DeepIYM
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Life is as Life is Lived
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well said

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