Posts: 5624
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted December 29, 2004 08:56 PM         

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You tried me on like a coat of paint,
not realizing perhaps that this shade isn't so easily removed.
I stuck on you.
(wasn't that your plan all along, my marrying man)
My Moon mate brother, my soulful lover
We paint each other.
Your Venus caresses my hair and wishes I were there
My Venus smiles and flirts, not always seeing the hurts.
But still it works
So this little playful ode,
this shining, is owed
to you
making pretty babies together
isn't all we can do
not to prove.. not to be rude, but once is enough to fulfill
One perfect girl has fit this bill.
I want to travel and dream some more
I want to be old and not sore
I want to see this is heaven sent,
I want not to resent
this wander lust, this faery dust
this fear I have that my heart will rust
If I don't flex it for all
I need to see you, to truly see
this thing we had (seven years ago started!!)
Is what was intended for me
You moniter it frequently
check its pulse with strong hands on tired feet
making me silly with ego treats
An Aries made selfless by love
Wow.
I take advantage I am sad to say.
although I say it every day,
(by the way) I love you
does that make it okay?
I appreciate the care and feeding of a princess
I take off the tiara and jump in the mud,
with a glorious sweeping humble
thank you
to you

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posted December 30, 2004 08:04 AM         

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want to travel and dream some more
I want to be old and not sore
I want to see this is heaven sent,
I want not to resent
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how beautiful

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posted December 30, 2004 08:39 AM         

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pixie ~ has your Aries read this? It's tangible, delicate and honest.

I believe it's quite possible for people to fall deeper in love. I would. I mean I have done when I've read words for me.

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I appreciate the care and feeding of a princess
I take off the tiara and jump in the mud,
with a glorious sweeping humble

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*nodding*

Errm.. *thinking* Bagsy! I want pixie for my partner in the next life!...

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posted December 30, 2004 09:59 AM         

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Oh pixie... That was absolutely beautiful. This is my favorite poem by you yet. Has he read it yet? Really... , well done. You are very talented with expressing yourself through words.

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posted December 30, 2004 10:10 AM         

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Oh my God, this left me speechless...

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posted December 30, 2004 11:16 AM         

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posted December 30, 2004 02:00 PM         

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posted December 30, 2004 04:25 PM         

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beautiful!

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From: Ontario, Canada
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posted December 31, 2004 01:51 AM         

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Silly, I know, but I wrote it and posted it as is my habit. But I didn't share it with him. I grabbed him tonight and said "I have been told I have to share this with you." and lead him to the computer to show him.
He loved it. And other than years ago when he showed me his devotion to me by listening to me share my (outdated) poetry with him, and perhaps the occassional excerpt I share, I don't let him in my world that way. He doesn't write. He is sensitive, but it comes out in different ways.
Thanks for making me show him. It was for him, after all.
My private little world encompasses so much more, and I am selective with my vulnerabilities. He sees me at my best and worst. I guess I am selfish with Lindaland.
And thank you all for encouraging me to write and share. You make me feel so good.

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posted December 31, 2004 02:50 AM         

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I read this when I was on the computer quickly this morning, and I'm so glad you showed it to your husband. It's so warm, sweet and romantic ~ definitely my favourite from you too.

Angie

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posted January 02, 2005 02:44 PM         

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Pixie,

Wanna make out?

Damn lady.... you just know ...

Ghani

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posted January 02, 2005 05:22 PM         

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I just really love this, I wish I could find the words to tell you how much, it gets me everytime...

Bowing before you /\

Akash.

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posted January 02, 2005 06:00 PM         

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Oh, well thank you! That's nice to hear!

***bows right back***

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posted January 04, 2005 09:20 PM         

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Oh hey.. yeah .. Ghani, let's totally make out!!!
Just read that now.
YIPPEE! Make out time!!!!!

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posted January 05, 2005 04:35 AM         

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I know that Im abit late reading this because I have only just recently joined the LL familia, but can I just say, I have been reading alot of your poetry and you are truly talented.

This is definetely my favourite so far. i love the way you express yourself. You define the term "poetic".

"(wasn't that your plan all along, my marrying man)
My Moon mate brother, my soulful lover
We paint each other." (Beautiful)

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posted January 05, 2005 09:15 AM         

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Bee, you have a question here; http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum8/HTML/001306.html

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posted January 05, 2005 05:50 PM         

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I so enjoyed reading that so much...you make pOetry fun Pix!

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