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From: London
Registered: Dec 2004

posted December 30, 2004 08:26 AM         

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The Future Song...

Could I write a song to be read in the future?
Standing then…reading now
These words written today for tomorrow
Who will read this, what will they think?
Will it be my wife, my son, a lover of ink?
I’m a creator who is afraid to make a mistake
Nothing will get created, and I will complain it’s too late but
Back to the future song…
This one’s for you, for me, for whoever reads it first
Something for then with love from now.
I see you reading it,
Like I’ve done so many before me, perhaps they new about-this
The way I hope you do, you, whoever you are.

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From: Over here! (UK)
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posted December 30, 2004 08:52 AM         

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How intricate within itsElf, Dynamic

I like it, simply and effectively makes me think of time ~ a topic that intrigues me.

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From: the lascivious jungle
Registered: Aug 2004

posted December 30, 2004 04:26 PM         

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you severed a thought and found a poem inside! I love it

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From: London
Registered: Dec 2004

posted December 30, 2004 05:42 PM         

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Thank you whiterabbit,it is your appreciation that makes it special, anyway I love your nick....
I'll do my best to follow you!

Akash.

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From: the lascivious jungle
Registered: Aug 2004

posted December 30, 2004 11:27 PM         

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enjoy the ride!

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