Posts: 6229
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted January 27, 2005 01:05 AM         

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Heart sick
Not broken
This is one ill
which has no pill
and such a hard will to swallow
with no washing-down elixer
that leaves a pure taste in the mouth.
A mixed shot
of what comes before the chaser.
I cast it to the night
and my dreams answer in rhythm and
yearning
a higher earning
just a feeling, wrong or right
there unprodded
but prodding feels so much better
filling this greedy need
such spirit in this humanity
spirit in a commodity
quiet sex indecently
exposed
our veins to vanity

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Posts: 909
From: MAINE! :)
Registered: Aug 2003

posted January 28, 2005 12:07 AM         

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* sneaks in with a sly grin and a dreamy gaze... *

*whispers* ''Pixie, I just came in to give you a kiss on your cheek.''

*kisses Pix and runs out with pink cheeks. *

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Posts: 6229
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted January 28, 2005 12:27 AM         

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*****puckers up*****

Thanks for the smooch, bebe.

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Posts: 5050
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004

posted January 29, 2005 07:41 PM         

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Beautiful!

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From: Pamplona
Registered: Aug 2004

posted January 31, 2005 08:31 AM         

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I could see this one as a spoken word/hip hop kind of thing...I don't know, I think it would work really well.

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