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Topic: My Home land...
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sweetlibra
Knowflake Posts: 189
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Registered: Oct 2004
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posted January 29, 2005 05:05 AM
 
In the end of a long dry journey
you stood there lush in green
Smell of paddy fields
The life flowing through my veins My sweet home land
Embrace me...
I want to b lost in your lush greenary
Hear what bamboos whisper How'll i live?
knowing that I am just a visitor
how'll i survive?
without your monsoon? i knew this pain always
i knew i had to leave you one day
and i had to long for you the rest of my life
stronger than any longing known to me My home land
you are my lost childhood
my innocent dreams
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ghanima81
Knowflake Posts: 909
From: MAINE! :)
Registered: Aug 2003
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posted January 29, 2005 01:52 PM
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moonshine
Knowflake Posts: 189
From: UK
Registered: Oct 2004
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posted January 29, 2005 02:18 PM
Sounds like India you're writing about. Where are you from?I feel like this poem could have been written about me.. I'm a visitor to my homeland too. 
Thanks 
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26taurus
Moderator Posts: 5037
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted January 29, 2005 07:39 PM
That was really beautiful sweetlibra. IP: Logged |
sweetlibra
Knowflake Posts: 189
From:
Registered: Oct 2004
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posted January 31, 2005 12:18 AM
moonshine,I am from southern part of India.
The most beautiful place on earth...Its nick name is God's Own Country
26Taurus,its what i felt while leaving my land..
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