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Topic: man/woman/man/woman
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whiterabbit
Knowflake Posts: 365
From: Pamplona
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted January 30, 2005 06:54 PM
 
the growl that is the woman in you
that impels you to stretch out before me
as if offering yourself for some peanuts of a price
the howl I release for the woman I see
that compels you to steer your rosy knees towards my weak spot
and it's really and armandaleg price you're asking for
it's really a robbery.
but I succumb like others had like so many others will, I'm certain
and you barely look pleased
more absent really
though all your weight may be on me now, all your warmth, velvetskin, fragrance
you are absent
and all my ardour, adoration, total and utter enchantment is a handful of dead moths to you now
woman!
when we want your body you are disgraced
when we want your heart you are a malice!
we are all lechers to you but before your clothes come off we may have been kings
the air is sublime when your mouth expels it
but you take a towel and and stir up the wind to carry it off
"do NOT be affected" you scream
and then you left.
I'm still scratching at the walls trying to find pieces of your beauty scattered
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26taurus
Moderator Posts: 5097
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted January 30, 2005 09:25 PM
Holy!!  I loved that. All of it.IP: Logged |
pixelpixie
Moderator Posts: 6265
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003
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posted January 31, 2005 01:22 AM
me too.
That was fabulous!
More please.IP: Logged |
sweetlibra
Knowflake Posts: 198
From:
Registered: Oct 2004
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posted January 31, 2005 04:02 AM
wow whiterabbit..
I dont have words to describe how i felt after reading this..
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whiterabbit
Knowflake Posts: 365
From: Pamplona
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted January 31, 2005 08:21 AM
thank you for the kind words. IP: Logged |
moonshine
Knowflake Posts: 195
From: UK
Registered: Oct 2004
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posted January 31, 2005 04:40 PM
That was fantastic whiterabbit. I honestly held my breath while reading it!  IP: Logged |
ghanima81
Knowflake Posts: 947
From: MAINE! :)
Registered: Aug 2003
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posted January 31, 2005 07:10 PM
*shudders* .... that was sweeeeet....
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GingerB
Knowflake Posts: 134
From: Lucedale, MS USA
Registered: Oct 2004
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posted February 01, 2005 10:16 AM
Whoa!Kinda sad, really... IP: Logged |
whiterabbit
Knowflake Posts: 365
From: Pamplona
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted February 01, 2005 06:38 PM
thank you it's so good to share, sometimes. IP: Logged |
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