Posts: 6581
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted February 17, 2005 02:34 PM         

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The book was carefully constructed
He wished it was handcrafted
Filled with versions of me
Through his lust filled eyes.
Violet misted tenderness
a stripper pole's demise
He made the book
made it more than it was
until it sat alive on a table
for anyone to see
this version of me
Foolish he was,
to make this book
a book of matches
and when I shut it
one ignited
still attached to the rest
Doesn't he know when it burns
it will set alight the lies
he made
through his disguise.......

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From: Miami, FL, USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted February 17, 2005 07:20 PM         

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pix, this sounds like it's about the 'rat with silver-dollar eyes'. If it is, it seems like he's affected you quite a bit. I hope that you are able to resolve the situation and I send you my patience, of course, if my kenning is keen.

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Posts: 6581
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted February 18, 2005 01:41 AM         

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Thank you, it is indeed, perceptive one.

Yeah, I work through things this way....
I hope you all don't mind my ramblings...

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From: Miami, FL, USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted February 18, 2005 10:58 AM         

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Not at all, pix. I have much enjoyed your cathartic writings here as I have of others' writings as well. Isn't it great to be able to post just so you know that it's out there in the ethers?

Keep them coming!

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