Posts: 2023
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted February 28, 2005 07:18 PM         

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waters wearing this pencil thin
the shape of things that I've got in
the tears are flustered nothing comes
too many cried inside
or is it my Moon so salty
already.. crusted in fact~
crusty
and shamed
and not quite good enough
not quite as tough as
whomever
and however
I still see them all
I was thnking about Capricorn
how one devotes their all for the cause to work
whether it be children-rearing,
or fixing up a selfish jerk...
the job is all
the act .the pride .the fire inside
a job well done, not unlike steak
a slab of pride there on my plate.
My drive for my kids?
too selfish to be all consuming
I would kill or be killed, nothing less
I would see them cuddled on my chest
BUT
a great divide I conquer
a hug which must be bugged , I force myself to love.. It seems natural really
too natural for it to be anything beyond real.
right?
Saturn sitting on my face
I'm a little sick of self disgrace
Yet I must face. My face.
Sure it's a good one,
I do my best and fake the rest
I ride my waves until they crest
All these f^cking clever lies
go one on one with this disguise
Oh, I know its more,
but sometimes I forget.
Come here and ride this rage until it passes
I need an outlet for my masses
Come here and get this engine steaming
I need a reason for this grieving.

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Posts: 1706
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted February 28, 2005 10:49 PM         

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Pix,

You have an awesome energy to all of your writing. I really enjoy your stuff!

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Posts: 2023
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted March 01, 2005 02:44 AM         

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aw, thanks!
I hope you enjoy, as I sense an influx coming.....

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Posts: 457
From: California, USA
Registered: Nov 2004

posted March 01, 2005 03:31 PM         

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Pixie wow you really do get people involved in your stories. You have quite a way with language. I feel like its really you we're hearing and not something contrived. Keep em coming

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Posts: 1534
From:
Registered: Dec 2004

posted March 01, 2005 07:13 PM         

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So powerfully passionate ... I wish that damn saturn would leave you wonderful eagles alone!

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Posts: 9317
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004

posted March 01, 2005 08:58 PM         

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Loved it.

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