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Topic: Sleeping Butterflies
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LeoSweetHeart Knowflake Posts: 327 From: California, USA Registered: Nov 2004
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posted March 02, 2005 11:38 PM
Sleeping Butterflies Love is said to be sweet and rosy Little girls dream of its fairy tales In its name they dance around In tierras and sparkly gowns Chasing the Flutterbies Through daisy fields Sprinkles of its miracles Filled my merry little soul
All I could see was Love Darkness was swallowed up In a vast sea of light And angels kissed me on the cheeks Almost every single night Golden mirrors followed me As smiles and laughter Reflected the world’s chivalry Mommy you were there You knew that beautiful time What was it like to kiss it all goodbye? I don’t remember It all happened so fast Which particular day was it Did I laugh my last pure laugh? Now she twinkles through my mind Like a faint reminder Of life’s precious design In the innocence of youth The angel’s save you from your falls They hear your every prayer And they believe what you saw I cry now because she’s almost gone Have I seen too much by now? Is knowing darkness Where it all went wrong? No I am wiser now My experiences make me strong But when I’m in love’s clutches I remember her sweet song Suddenly I want nothing but To feel Not the strength that Life Has bestowed upon me But the only thing that is Real A love that releases that little Girl!!!!!!!!!!!! Told ya I was going to write more. Boy do I love it. You girls were right, its quite cathartic. Like a deep breath of fresh air
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26taurus Moderator Posts: 6216 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted March 03, 2005 02:44 AM
Well done again! It was a very Leonine poem to me. If I had to guess the writer's sign without knowing, I'd say Leo. Fairy tales, tierras and crowns, sprinkles, love, golden mirrors, smiles. All very "Leo things". I'm glad you have found another way to express yourself. We all need a creative outlet or two. Keep em comin'!!! IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross Knowflake Posts: 787 From: north of Boston, MA Registered: Aug 2004
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posted March 03, 2005 10:06 AM
I enjoyed that. Very Good. Yes, there are few things more cathartic than artistic expression. It IS a lot like a breath of fresh air... I would liken it a particularly gratifying bowel movement, lol. "My sh--, it is her milk." - Kurt Cobain Recipe For Love:
1 part Faith 1 part Caution MIX WELL LET COOL!!! ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!! IP: Logged |
LeoSweetHeart Knowflake Posts: 327 From: California, USA Registered: Nov 2004
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posted March 03, 2005 04:16 PM
Thank you both! I'm glad you liked it 26Taurus, Yea I guess do wear my Sun Sign on my sleeve, haha. Now that you point it out to me, it is kind of funny Heart Shaped Cross, Your recipe for love is a good one It explains why my love life is little bumpy right now...I only only used 3/4 part faith. I'm going to mix in the other 1/4 now, hope its not too late IP: Logged |
maya-v Knowflake Posts: 659 From: New York Registered: Dec 2004
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posted March 03, 2005 05:20 PM
Caution ... since when did it get aquainted with love and all its little cousins and siblings?I would like to see tha family reunion, show me the man(or the woman) who can prove it actually happened!
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26taurus Moderator Posts: 6216 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted March 03, 2005 05:27 PM
huh?IP: Logged |
26taurus Moderator Posts: 6216 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted March 03, 2005 05:29 PM
LeoSH, The lion is a great sign to wear on your sleeve. The sign of the Heart. I love you lovable pussycats. IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 6925 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Aug 2003
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posted March 04, 2005 01:30 AM
Perfect blend of wisdom and innocence. *with a splash of lime*IP: Logged |
aqua Knowflake Posts: 826 From: dreamland Registered: Jan 2004
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posted March 04, 2005 02:50 AM
another beauty!!IP: Logged |
maya-v Knowflake Posts: 659 From: New York Registered: Dec 2004
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posted March 04, 2005 10:59 AM
I meant that you can be as cautious as you want, prepare yourself and build walls around your heart, but when it comes to love, or the pain it causes, you are never prepared. When love arrives, all your cautionary walls crumble.That is such a beautiful poem, Leo. It is so harmonious - a magical blend of light and shadow, of darkness and sunlight. IP: Logged |
LeoSweetHeart Knowflake Posts: 327 From: California, USA Registered: Nov 2004
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posted March 04, 2005 04:07 PM
Thank you ALL!! Your all so sweet. You put a smile on my face this morning IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross Knowflake Posts: 787 From: north of Boston, MA Registered: Aug 2004
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posted March 06, 2005 01:15 PM
LOL Leo! Hope it works, Bon apetite! maya,
Thats what faith is for, to balance caution. When you combine an equal amount of both, you get something which transcends the common definitions of either caution or faith. An openness; a kind of secure vulnerability; a symultaneous contraction and expansion of loving attention; an awakened state. At least, I think that's how it works. Realizing that equilibrium in yourself, or finding the person who complements you in such a way as to inspire a realization of that equilibrium, well, that's another story. Like all the good ones, its a perfect mystery. IP: Logged |