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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 3226 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted March 08, 2005 09:07 PM
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pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 5492 From: Ontario Canada Registered: Jun 2005
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posted March 08, 2005 09:18 PM
Masterful. I feel it.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 27305 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted March 09, 2005 10:31 AM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 3226 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted March 14, 2005 10:34 PM
Thanks for your responses, Pix and Randall!IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 16283 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted March 15, 2005 11:54 PM
I missed this before. I Loooooved that future. Very well done. quote: Your eyes saw the sun, the rain, the rising mist yet somehow you managed to dismiss the significance of all that was, and to this very day your eyes have not forgotten and when I look, they remind me.
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 3226 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted March 16, 2005 10:23 AM
26 Thank you!I've had writer's block forever, but I sat down at my computer one night and this is what spilled out. I'm glad you liked it! IP: Logged |
LeoSweetHeart Knowflake Posts: 539 From: Registered: Nov 2004
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posted April 08, 2005 03:08 AM
Future I just got chills reading that! Talk about capturing the unrequited passion of a fire sign with a virgo. That was beautiful And I felt it was really from your heart. these are my favorite lines:
Qoute: ------------------------------------------- I handed you a stone you held awhile before you called it gray and tossed it merrily away, whose gentle smooth and graceful hue were memories alive in my fingertips well before it left yours. -------------------------------------------- That just totally spoke to me...you described feelings I've had in my heart for a while that I couldn't even express so clearly. Why can't they see all the magic we see? Wouldn't it be nice if we could share it with them and invite them into our parallel universes? Instead sometimes their Reality ridicules our Wonder and makes it think twice. You reminded me that we are blessed to be able to view the world the way we do, for the world sparkles and performs miracles for us constantly. While it simply mirrors their need for order and timeliness. Maybe we're supposed to be the angels that show them glimses of heaven to remind them to lift their heads up once in a while. I know that deep down my Virgo really does admire my faith and sometimes he can almost touch it with my guidance. Maybe thats part of the allure of the fire sign/ Virgo (earth) relationship...even when these signs are blended in one person. One foot in heaven, one on earth. Sorry I kind of went off a little, but your poem inspired those thoughts so I thought I'd share them with you. I'm glad you told me about your poem, now you can add me to your fan list IP: Logged |
SunChild Moderator Posts: 4486 From: Australia Registered: Jan 2004
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posted April 08, 2005 05:35 AM
WoW- I just found this- oh you captured the feeling alright. Those are thoughts I have with him ------------------ "And dreams, don't ever forget, are the first step in manifesting wishes into reality"-- Linda Goodman's Star Signs IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 3226 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted April 08, 2005 05:11 PM
LeoSweetHeart,I really loved this quote: Instead sometimes their Reality ridicules our Wonder and makes it think twice.
That was beautiful. I think you're right that we are lucky to be able to see the world as we see it, and get from it what we do. Even if it's lonely sometimes, I would never want that to change. I wrote to you in soul unions and you pinpointed what I was describing there when you said quote: I know that deep down my Virgo really does admire my faith and sometimes he can almost touch it with my guidance.
That's the intimacy thing I was talking about, then *poof* it's gone. But you've really helped me put into words some of the feelings I've been describing. Thank you! Sun Child, I'm glad you liked this. It makes me happy when people can reach one another through poetry or fiction. I'm sorry, I can't remember, but are you in love with one of these Virgo boys, too? I'm so glad we get to talk about this because I think it is a big issue in a relationship between girls like us and guys like that. It can be really hard sometimes, and sometimes you just want to give up... but then-- well, you know... LeoSweetHeart said it best: glimpses of heaven!
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