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sue g
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Posts: 382
From: ireland
Registered: Sep 2004

posted March 26, 2005 08:39 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for sue g     Edit/Delete Message
For anyone who has experienced the "torment" of being a part of a soul union. For Pixie who "feels" her way thro life and all others here who have made a deep deep impression on me x x x

I see them dancing with wild abandoment
hair flying, feet tapping, like two mischevious
children, I watch them moving, eyes
flashing, hands clapping

She hears him laughing
he feels her grieving he smiles
she cries, they stop believing......

As the music gets louder and their
joy increases lives flash before them
fragmented into pieces
and as he looks into her eyes
he sees she is living, they are
dying, he is laughing as she is crying.....

Their fingers entwined and feet
still tapping, their hearts are screaming
souls are bleeding, as he is running
she is pleading........

As the dance continues I watch them
intently, I sense their joy
feel their pain, I can see her sorrow,
feel his shame
and as I turn away I see them
drowning, she is gasping, he is frowning
and down down into the depths they sink
and all the time their dance goes on
and on and on.....

All of a sudden the spell is broken
its as if from a dream they have woken
the life they knew, in a flash
disappears and upon realization, she
can feel the tears, her dream has
been shattered snatched cruelly away
her heart feels battered as she begins
to pray......

The dancing has stopped he looks uneasy
and scared and its as though he doesnt
remember the love that they'd shared
but as he closes his eyes and senses
her aura, he recalls with intenstity
how he did adore her

The dance of life continues to flow
now their separate ways these soul mates
must go, their union though precious
must be relinquished for another
she for a husband, he for a lover

The dancing has ceased, the room
falls silent, as I watch them embrace
and hear her heart race, I weep inside
for the loss of the other
like a baby being torn away
cruelly from his mother
and as I look upon them both I
see them as one as if this union has
just begun, will they ever be together
till death do them part, united with each
other, in body, soul and heart......

The dance continues............x

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pixelpixie
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Posts: 7281
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted March 26, 2005 11:32 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pixelpixie     Edit/Delete Message
WOW!!!
That was amazing.. the wording, the feeling, the rhythm.
I loooooooved this.
(and yes, I felt it.)

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