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Topic: You No(One)
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Dynamic_Stillness Knowflake Posts: 67 From: London Registered: Dec 2004
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posted March 28, 2005 01:36 PM
My words are baron but my emotions give birth Material, spiritual, heaven and earth You and I beginning of the search Together we will sow the field of infinite possibilities They say doubts are like demons, I’m saying both don’t exist Just the flow of electricity Pulsating vibrating, an explosion of all there is… What you call ‘me’ and the things we see. Nothing separates in the stream that flows ceaselessly Just the flow of electricity, whirling, twirling Close your eyes and see…close your life and see… But you don’t believe me, and so the game goes on The make up just before we break up The shake up before we wake up to the stillness within... Step out of character. Can you do this for a little while? Celebrate your inconsistencies gather all your regrets, Let the past drown in the beauty if all that is… Seemingly wrong choices, one to many mistakes Fade into nothingness when I look at your face A train passes by, pink tainted skies I’m okay right here, right now I’m overwhelmed, I know that I will see you again A different place, a different face Everything maybe different, but you will be the same.
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moonshine Knowflake Posts: 298 From: UK Registered: Oct 2004
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posted March 29, 2005 03:06 PM
wow that was so passionate, Dynamic stillness, I love it IP: Logged |
Dynamic_Stillness Knowflake Posts: 67 From: London Registered: Dec 2004
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posted March 29, 2005 06:44 PM
Thank you my Moonshine...Your appreciation makes it beautiful.IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 7444 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Aug 2003
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posted March 29, 2005 08:30 PM
Passion indeed. IP: Logged |
SunChild Moderator Posts: 730 From: Vic, Australia Registered: Jan 2004
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posted March 29, 2005 10:24 PM
Gave me goosebumps for some reason !!!------------------ "And dreams, don't ever forget, are the first step in manifesting wishes into reality"-- Linda Goodman's Star Signs IP: Logged |
26taurus Moderator Posts: 6999 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted March 29, 2005 11:47 PM
Woooooow......I loved that Dynamic. quote: You and I beginning of the search Together we will sow the field of infinite possibilities They say doubts are like demons, I’m saying both don’t exist Just the flow of electricity Pulsating vibrating, an explosion of all there is… What you call ‘me’ and the things we see. Nothing separates in the stream that flows ceaselessly
quote: Let the past drown in the beauty if all that is… Seemingly wrong choices, one to many mistakes Fade into nothingness when I look at your face A train passes by, pink tainted skies I’m okay right here, right now I’m overwhelmed, I know that I will see you again A different place, a different face Everything maybe different, but you will be the same.
Beautiful.
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Dynamic_Stillness Knowflake Posts: 67 From: London Registered: Dec 2004
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posted March 30, 2005 09:14 AM
Wow! Thank you all for appreciating my poem. Pixelpixie you are a Goddess of poetry here... My 26Taurus, I know that you speak more with your silence but don't deprive us of your work! You are all inspiring, really stars that brighten my galaxy.D.S IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 656 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted March 30, 2005 08:52 PM
This is beautiful, DS. IP: Logged |
26taurus Moderator Posts: 6999 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted March 31, 2005 03:00 AM
Dynamic, you are such a sweet soul. I'm just the quiet/private type. But I'm thinking about posting something soon. I dont know, we'll see.Please continue to grace us with your beautiful work. IP: Logged |