Posts: 556
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Registered: Jun 2003

posted April 24, 2005 07:26 PM         

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This twisted moon
That wreathes with thorns and vices
It longs to clamp and plant down
And shoot into the skye

Its still but tugs away slowly
Ripping limb from mind and
Seeking for an anchor
Just a simple vessel to hold and seal
To contain its expansive fear

But it cannot find its tunneled path
It spreads thorny roots here and there
Turns all to stone but cannot grasp
What it means to root and love

O this twisted blood filled moon
All that it touches slips away
Drips away with slippery pain
All is an earthquake and nothing is real
The shadowy moon leaves the earthly plane

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Posts: 7998
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted April 25, 2005 01:56 AM         

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am impressed.
Write more here!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posts: 7330
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004

posted April 29, 2005 03:33 AM         

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That was awesome BlueRoamer.
Really, I love your style.
Please share more.

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"I was so much older then, I'm younger than that now."
- Bob Dylan

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From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted April 29, 2005 08:48 AM         

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I feel you, BlueRoamer!

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From: New York
Registered: Dec 2004

posted April 29, 2005 09:46 AM         

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Kindred soul ... love the passion, BR

You have to reach down to the deepest, darkest corners of your soul to bring out such pain and intensity. Thanks for being so brave and thanks for sharing it with us.

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From: Just left of center
Registered: May 2004

posted April 29, 2005 11:16 AM         

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EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!

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