Posts: 7971
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted April 25, 2005 01:48 PM         

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New
I shake with it
my neck branded
I am so caught
it is only time now
and I will have what I sought
and already the knowledge
that I don't want everything it will bring me...
still I do it.
This is the danger I have flirted with
and I want to sink my teeth into it with as much ferrocity as I own
and then make some more
this is the thing I have left unnamed, yet it drew me into the pursuit
and now I wear this suit
of shame and love
I will wear it without pride,
but with completion
and I know it is the straw that broke this love
on my back
and still I draw
and give nothing back
the chips will fall
*the ones on my shoulder*
and the ones that represent
the crushing weight
that I need something beyond
though I cannot name it
It held me today
and I wanted to sway
and give myself away
I know the devils' come to play
yet I know he is not all evil
and not all wrong
but he is the tempting
fruit and he shakes my tree
so much i'm not really feeling like me
I want to be free
I want to embrace
this energy wiping the smirk from my face
*to be replaced no doubt
by the frown
of going down
a road I don't know
or I could stay on this one that was made
but through its certainty, it's scaring me
*poetic license to vulgarity*
F*cking Uranus inside of me
The explanation seems futile and small
though Uranus will say eff them all
It's too late I am already falling
not in love you see, but an evolutionary crawling
*It is my calling*

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Posts: 87
From: Miami, FL, USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted April 25, 2005 06:11 PM         

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You are so brave to let us see you in such a way.
The path of words you've paved is remarkably clear, as if they encapsulated the same vibratory frequency of an illuminating light.

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I know the devils' come to play
yet I know he is not all evil
and not all wrong
but he is the tempting
fruit and he shakes my tree
so much i'm not really feeling like me

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Wondrous!

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Posts: 21158
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted April 26, 2005 11:56 AM         

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"There is no use trying," said Alice; "one can't believe impossible things." "I dare say you haven't had much practice," said the Queen. "When I was your age, I always did it for half an hour a day. Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast." Lewis Carroll

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Posts: 76
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004

posted April 27, 2005 03:57 PM         

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Yep...certainly a Goddess of Poetry.

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Posts: 552
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted April 27, 2005 04:22 PM         

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love it Pixie!!

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Posts: 1057
From: New York
Registered: Dec 2004

posted April 27, 2005 04:41 PM         

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Im sorry if I often read your poems and yet dont respond or seem to be pretending not to see.

Its just that most of your poems speak directly to my heart and put me in deep thought - almost meditate. I guess that watery moon just floods me with empathy and mroe than the beautiful words, I go beyond to the meaning and try to judge what you are going through and whether you need my help or reassurance or if you are just being your bright sparkly, mysterious sexy self and drawing the devotion from others that you so richly deserve.

So next time I dont respond, doesnt mean I dont adore your words, just that I dont have much to say but a lot to feel ...

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Posts: 7971
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted April 27, 2005 08:11 PM         

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Awwwwwww. thank you!
Well... I will often do that too..I will read a poem, but can't comment on it.. I think i'd make a poor judge or teacher, or anything where you critisize or have to explain something in detail. I just feel it, isn't that enough?
So I know, and I thank you.

So.. to the knowflakes who are wondering where my comments are... they are in my heart.. with mayas....

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