Posts: 776
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted April 27, 2005 05:23 PM         

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You touch me and I am overwhelmed by the passion I feel for you.
I feel you breath on my neck, sending shivers through me, electricity
Bodies mingle, grasping, moaning, shaking, screaming, exploding!!!!
It is never enough.
Only you can make me feel this way.
We lie together, sweating, panting, exhausted
But still we can’t let go. MORE MORE MORE
I don’t want to let you go.
Can’t we stay here forever? In each others arms.
But I must go
And as I go....
I miss you
I think of you as the piece to fill the empty space in my soul.
I think of you when the Sun goes down and the Moon lights the night sky.
And I miss you.
I think of you when I lie alone, in my cold bed, longingly searching for a hint of your scent
And I miss you.
I think of you when my heart is aching, from the loneliness that fills my life,
The anguish from a breaking heart.
Life incomplete without you.

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From: New York
Registered: Dec 2004

posted April 27, 2005 07:11 PM         

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From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted April 27, 2005 08:16 PM         

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aw.. yeah!

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Posts: 776
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted April 27, 2005 09:18 PM         

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thanks for your support of my feeble attempt.

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From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted April 27, 2005 09:22 PM         

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oh shut up!
Feeble attempt my ass!
I was licking my lips and going.. 'Ohhhhh, yeah, I know!!!'
Stop that!!!!

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From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004

posted April 28, 2005 03:33 AM         

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Bluemoon, that was so touching. You have a truly poetic heart. Which is not surprising, being a Cancer. I loved that. And I know that 'ache'. Thank you for sharing.

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posted April 28, 2005 04:44 AM         

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Bluemoon, exactly what i feel

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Posts: 776
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted April 28, 2005 09:04 AM         

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I love you guys! So much!!

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From: dreamland
Registered: Jan 2004

posted May 18, 2005 12:11 PM         

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what a marvel bluemoon.
wonderfully done!

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From: London
Registered: Dec 2004

posted May 18, 2005 12:45 PM         

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Bluemoon that was amazing, very powerful and it left me with a lingering silence...What a ride!

Keep writing.

Akash.

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From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted May 18, 2005 02:06 PM         

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Thanks so much, Aqua and Dynamic! It means alot to me!

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From: dreamland
Registered: Jan 2004

posted May 20, 2005 10:39 AM         

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keep creating such stuffs , you have really got the talent within.

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