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Topic: BEAUTIFUL GIRL (Across from me)
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Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 80
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted May 03, 2005 03:32 PM
 
There you were, right across from me
I almost lost my breath
Thought I died then and there
Until my heart had hit my chest
And from all the poems I've written
No words would come to say
And from all the parts I've played
No gesture could conveyJust how beautiful you are... A thousand love songs played in my head
If I chose a chorus, this is what it would have said...
I wish I came up to you-the most beautiful girl I've ever seen
I can't believe I just sat there
And now you will never know what I mean
When I say you had me without even saying hello
You unknowingly owned a heart sitting right in front of you
But you didn’t hear the chorus the background vocals were to loud
This heart turned liquid as you walked out.
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greycat
Knowflake Posts: 98
From: Australia
Registered: Sep 2004
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posted May 03, 2005 11:10 PM
That is really niceIP: Logged |
26taurus
Moderator Posts: 7365
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted May 04, 2005 03:49 AM
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firelights
Knowflake Posts: 57
From: india
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted May 04, 2005 09:12 AM
wats your sunsign?IP: Logged |
Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 80
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted May 04, 2005 03:21 PM
Thank you all for reading my poem, it was based on a true story!
With regards to my sign, it's Leo...
B(Earth)-date 31/07/82 so if anyone can tell me when I'm going to see that girl again I promise not to bombard you with any more of my poems! ;-)Love as it is...
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pixelpixie
Moderator Posts: 8106
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003
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posted May 04, 2005 11:00 PM
Dynamic, are you a man?
This website is over 90% female ( Amazon Paradise)
So I guess I assume things, unless otherwise indicated...I'll take your time and place of birth, if you want some insight..... IP: Logged |
pixelpixie
Moderator Posts: 8106
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003
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posted May 04, 2005 11:00 PM
Oh.. and yes, that was lovely.IP: Logged |
sweetlibra
Knowflake Posts: 294
From:
Registered: Oct 2004
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posted May 05, 2005 12:53 AM
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Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 80
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted May 05, 2005 08:46 AM
Most Precious Pixelpixie...To answer your question, yes I am a man. 90% Female!!!!! Now you tell me!!!!! (Just Kidding) as you know the body is but a vehicle...
Thank you for offering to take down my details but all is well. I could never express enough just how powerful your poetry is and how much I look foward to reading it. Isn't it amazing how sometimes our appreciation for words can actually leave us speechless? May this find you with the knowing that Love Loves you... Take care and keep writing!
Akash.
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pixelpixie
Moderator Posts: 8106
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003
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posted May 05, 2005 12:14 PM
Well, so now that I know you are a man, I can swoon when you say beautiful things like that about me.
Good to know.
 and thank you.. I know what you mean about speechless too.....IP: Logged |
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