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posted May 27, 2005 07:05 AM         

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my sweet surrender
yesterday u came
clad in a coy smile
just when my ego choked
to ask u by my side
my sweet whisper
yesterday u told me
as a matter of fact
what i could perceive
only as a heavenly dream
i went blank..
i rephrased
oh! i was still awake..!
my sweet love
yesterday u shocked me
cuz u wanted me
and then u asked me
were i asleep..!

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From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted May 27, 2005 03:39 PM         

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Registered: Nov 2002

posted January 30, 2008 01:25 PM         

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:tear: Thank you for the personal moment. Very moving. The feel reminded me of listening to Danny's Song by Kenny Loggins or Wond'ring Aloud by Jethro Tull. Emotionally intimate.

Very pretty. Thanks again.

daf

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