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sweetlibra
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posted June 01, 2005 01:59 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for sweetlibra     Edit/Delete Message
scribbles of my love
the remains
i can picture you
reading them to your partner
have a hearty laugh
let it be
i know i can have you
if i lied to you
if i lied to myself
that i can be traditional
that i value rituals
but i cant pretend
i know love is not enough
to start a life together
it is traditions and rituals
religion, caste, creed
that is important
my love is inferior
its abnormal for u
in that matter for anyone..!

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Devilfish
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posted June 01, 2005 09:41 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Devilfish     Edit/Delete Message
i dig your poem
except the last line
makes me whince
because i know (feel/sense)
you do not believe that
but that this person makes you question
the"validity"of your love
normal +
abnormal =

paranormal

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sweetlibra
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posted June 02, 2005 06:00 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for sweetlibra     Edit/Delete Message
It was written in frustration.
There is nothing i can do to improve my situation with this guy

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Bluemoon
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posted June 02, 2005 08:25 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Bluemoon     Edit/Delete Message

Hugs to you Sweetlibra!!

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26taurus
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posted June 04, 2005 03:59 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
Beautifully written. Above all, love yourself first, sweetlibra.

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