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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 269 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted June 02, 2005 06:54 PM
I'd like to hear some of your favorite poems/ poets!I just took a 20th Century American Poetry course, so I'll share some "newer" stuff that I fell in love with: I Know A Man As I sd to my friend, because I am always talking,--John, I sd, which was not his name, the darkness sur- rounds us, what can we do against it, or else, shall we & why not, buy a ******* big car, drive, he sd, for christ's sake, look out where yr going. Robert Creeley
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 269 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted June 02, 2005 06:56 PM
FlamesSmokey the Bear heads into the autumn woods with a red can of gasoline and a box of wooden matches. His ranger's hat is cocked at a disturbing angle. His brown fur gleams under the high sun as his paws, the size of catcher's mitts, crackle into the distance. He is sick of dispensing warnings to the careless, the half-wit camper, the dumbbell hiker. He is going to show them how a professional does it. --Billy Collins
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posted June 02, 2005 08:45 PM
Great idea future!********************************************* Fate - Rossetti two shall be born... the whole wide world apart and speak in different tongues... and have no thought each of the other's being... and no heed and these same two over unknown seas, to unknown lands, shall cross escaping wreck, defying death and all unconsciously shape each act, and bend each wandering step to this one end... that one day, out of darkness they must meet and read Life's meaning in each other's eyes and these same two along some narrow path of Life shall walk so nearly side by side that should one turn, ever so little space to left... or right their needs must stand acknowledged, face to face and yet... with wistful eyes, that never meet and groping hands that never clasp with lips, calling in vain, to ears that never hear they seek each other all their weary days and die unsatisfied ... and this is Fate IP: Logged |
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posted June 02, 2005 09:49 PM
Thanks to TINK. I now kNow ee. ***************************************my girl's tall with hard long eyes as she stands, with her long hard hands keeping silence on her dress, good for sleeping is her long hard body filled with surprise like a white shocking wire, when she smiles a hard long smile it sometimes makes gaily go clean through me tickling aches, and the weak noise of her eyes easily files my impatience to an edge--my girl's tall and taut, with thin legs just like a vine that's spent all of its life on a garden-wall, and is going to die. When we grimly go to bed with these legs she begins to heave and twine about me, and to kiss my face and head. IP: Logged |
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posted June 02, 2005 11:00 PM
She's got everything she needs, She's an artist, she don't look back. She's got everything she needs, She's an artist, she don't look back. She can take the dark out of the nighttime And paint the daytime black.You will start out standing Proud to steal her anything she sees. You will start out standing Proud to steal her anything she sees. But you will wind up peeking through her keyhole Down upon your knees. She never stumbles, She's got no place to fall. She never stumbles, She's got no place to fall. She's nobody's child, The Law can't touch her at all. She wears an Egyptian ring That sparkles before she speaks. She wears an Egyptian ring That sparkles before she speaks. She's a hypnotist collector, You are a walking antique. Bow down to her on Sunday, Salute her when her birthday comes. Bow down to her on Sunday, Salute her when her birthday comes. For Halloween give her a trumpet And for Christmas, buy her a drum. She Belongs To Me ~ Bob Dylan (sorry, song lyrics)
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 269 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted June 03, 2005 12:01 AM
Don't you already have a song lyric thread?! LOL. No... song lyrics are poetry, too. Especially Dylan.I couldn't understand your reference in your first poem... did you say that was ee? If it is, I haven't read that one before. IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 269 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted June 03, 2005 12:10 AM
A popular cummings poem:somewhere i have never travelled, gladly beyond any experience,your eyes have their silence: in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me, or which i cannot touch because they are too near your slightest look will easily unclose me though i have closed myself as fingers, you open always petal by petal myself as Spring opens (touching skilfully,mysteriously)her first rose or if your wish be to close me, i and my life will shut very beautifully ,suddenly, as when the heart of this flower imagines the snow carefully everywhere descending; nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals the power of your intense fragility:whose texture compels me with the color of its countries, rendering death and forever with each breathing (i do not know what it is about you that closes and opens;only something in me understands the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses) nobody,not even the rain,has such small hands
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posted June 03, 2005 01:22 AM
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posted June 03, 2005 04:13 AM
Yes, I was refering to ee, as in e e cummings. And no, my song chain got wiped out with the whole glitch thing. Started a new one though. I think you meant the reference to TINK.....? She introduced me to him. Now one of my faves. Yeah, I lived under a rock before. IP: Logged |
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posted June 03, 2005 04:33 AM
Sorry, that poem was:my girl's tall with hard long eyes... (XIX) - e. e. cummings IP: Logged |
whiterabbit Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Sep 2009
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posted June 03, 2005 04:39 PM
When Death Comes For YouWhen death comes for you, my dear, let him take you like a candleflame that is taken from its wick by a gentle stir of wind smelling of lilac The Puma You are mistaken, he said I am neither lecher nor womanizer. If I'm crazy about women it's for the beauty some pitying devil threw over them, a beauty that blinds my gaze to everything except lips eyes breasts and roils my blood like a delicious venom. When the fit is on me I am their slave, their man Fiday; they can do with me as they will and to their absurdest wish I am as malleable as putty, more pliant than straw. For their ally is not beauty alone but the scantness of sense or purpose I find in the remotest curved niche of the universe; whoever framed its empty immensities didn't reckon on a man's reason or conscience or the unassuageable ache in my heart. Women and poems are my sole chance here to give expelled breath shape and contour and fable it with meaning. I place on the brow of every woman I love a crown made from the choicest words; I dress her like a woodland queen in trope and metaphor. My desperation blossoms into garlands braceleting her wrists, my sick despair into flowering anklets. I plug the void with my phallus and making love on bed or carpet we transfigure pitchblack nothingness into a tamed puma whose whiskers we stroke between enrapturing kisses. .. both by Irving Layoton.. yes I definitely have a weakness for Canadian poet/womanizers IP: Logged |
teaselbaby Newflake Posts: 5 From: Ohio Registered: Jul 2009
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posted June 03, 2005 06:38 PM
I found this one last year, and thought it was cute ~Venus In Gemini By Mary Jo Wevers Love in a bookstore. What could be more enticing? So many books, so many words. Ideas flitting off the pages, out of book jackets, over shelves like clouds of yellow butterflies born away by the wind. How many can I catch? I want to collect them all. I move through the aisles with a quick step, wings upon my feet. My hands reach for them: Psychology Ornithology Art history Mysteries Romance? Why not? I love the variety, each new subject, the details, the intrigue, the excitement of it all. Why settle down in an armchair with just one? The stack next to my bed proves I can read more than one at a time. My arms full of books I turn turn down another aisle my eyes on the top shelf and I run into you. Each armful of books crashing to the floor, yours and mine. Words burst like balloons from our mouths, while sorting through the mess. I ask about the journal. You say you are a writer. Are you witty? Are you clever? Are you curious? Can we talk? http://www.creativechoices.com/article/poem/venus_in_gemini.htm ~~~~~ I liked a poem years ago, that was written by ee cummings ~ I can't remember what it was called though. IP: Logged |
moonshine Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Sep 2012
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posted June 03, 2005 07:31 PM
He has stained me, the colour of raven he's stained me. Beating a clay two-headed drum at both ends like a nautch girl I dance before sadhus. Back in town I'm called crazy, drunkard, a love sl*t — they incited the prince, who ordered me poisoned, but I drained the cup without missing a step. Mira's Lord is the true prince; he stained her the colour of raven. Birth after birth she is his. ---------Come to my bedroom I've scattered fresh buds on the couch, perfumed my body. Birth after birth I am your servant, sleep only with you. Mira's Lord does not perish— one glimse of the Dark One is all she requests. -------- The plums tasted sweet to the unlettered desert-tribe girl— but what manners! To chew into each! She was ungainly, low-caste, ill mannered and dirty, but the gods took the fruit she'd been sucking Why? She knew how to love. She might not distinguish splendour from filth but she'd tasted the nectar of passion. Might not know any Veda, but a chariot swept her away— now she frolics in heaven, ecstatically bound to her god. The Lord of Fallen Fools, says Mira, will save anyone who can practice rapture like that— I myself in a previous birth was a cowherding girl at Gokul ---- I love these, I have a whole book of them. they're translations of songs by an Indian Princess from the 15th century called Mira. She was so passionately in love about the God Krishna (the 'Dark One') that she scandalously gave up her royal life to wander the streets as a nomad and do nothing but sing these passion-charged love songs to him till she died. IP: Logged |
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posted June 07, 2005 12:14 AM
-THE MOON- Jack KerouacThe moon her magic be, big sad face Of infinity An illuminated clay ball Manifesting many gentlemanly remarks She kicks a star, clouds foregather In Scimitar shape, to round her Cradle out, upsidedown any old time You can also let the moon fool you With imaginary orange-balls Of blazing imiginary light in fright As eyeballs, hurt & foregathered, Wink to the wince of the seeing Of a little sprightly otay Which projects spikes of light Out the round smooth blue balloon Ball full of mountains and moons Deep as the ocean, high as the moon, Low as the lowliest river lagoon Fish in the Tar and pull in the Spar Billy de Bud and Hanshan Emperor And all wall moongazers since Daniel Machree, Yeats see Gaze at the moon ocean marking the face - In some cases The moon is you In any case The moon
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posted June 07, 2005 12:18 AM
"Zhang Zhour & The Butterfly" by Li Bo (a 4th century follower of Lao Zi (Lao Tzu)Zhauang Zhou in dream became a butterfly, And the butterfly became Zhuang Zhou at waking. Which was the real - the butterfly or the man? Who can tell the end of the endless changes of things? The water that flows into the depth of the distant sea Returns anon to the shallows of the distant sea The man, raising melons outside the green gate of the city, Was once the Prince of the East Hill, So must rank and riches vanish. You know it, still you toil and toil, - What for?
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posted June 07, 2005 12:38 AM
I am a woman of heart and mind With time on her hands No child to raise You come to me like a little boy And I give you my scorn and my praise You think I'm like your mother Or another lover or your sister Or the queen of your dreams Or just another silly girl When love makes a fool of me After the rush when you come back down You're always disappointed Nothing seems to keep you high Drive your bargains Push your papers Win your medals **** your strangers Don't it leave you on the empty side I'm looking for affection and respect A little passion And you want stimulation-nothing more That's what I think But you know I'll try to be there for you When your spirits start to sink All this talk about holiness now It must be the start of the latest style Is it all books and words Or do you really feel it? Do you really laugh? Do you really care? Do you really smile When you smile? You criticize and you flatter You imitate the best And the rest you memorize You know the times you impress me most Are the times when you don't try When you don't even tryWoman of Heart and Mind ` Joni Mitchell No one can tell me song lyrics are not poems. Some of them at least.
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 269 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted June 07, 2005 03:54 PM
I've already concurred! Song lyrics certainly are poems. IP: Logged |
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posted June 07, 2005 04:04 PM
That wasnt directed at you future. Just typing out loud.IP: Logged |
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posted June 07, 2005 04:40 PM
This is one I LOVE, a Native American poem by Beth Brant. Very raw, very natural.Ride the Turtle's Back A woman grows hard and skinny. She squeezes into small corners. Her quick eyes uncover dust and cobwebs. She reaches out for flint and sparks fly in the air. Flames turned loose on fields burn down to bare seeds we planted deep.
The corn is white and perfect. Under its pale, perfect kernels a rotting cob is betrayal. It lies in our bloated stomachs. I lie in Grandmother's bed and dream the earth into a turtle. She carries us slowly across the universe. The sun warms us. At night the stars do tricks. The moon caresses us. We are listening for the sounds of food. Mother is giving birth, Grandmother says. Corn whispers. Earth groans with labor turning corn yellow in the sun I lie in Grandmother's bed. We listen.
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posted June 08, 2005 06:28 PM
The Suicide's SongSo it's back once more, back up the slope. Why do they always ruin my rope With their cuts? I felt so ready the other day, Had a real foretaste of eternity In my guts. Spoonfeeding me yet another sip From life's cup. I don't want it, won't take any more of it, Let me throw up. Life is medium-rare and good, I see, And the world full of soup and bread, But it won't pass into the blood for me, Just goes to my head. It makes me ill, though others it feeds; Do see that I must deny it! For a thousand years from now at least I'm keeping a diet. by Rainer Maria Rilke
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posted June 08, 2005 06:31 PM
I love that Joni Mitchell one. Thanks 26!IP: Logged |
teaselbaby Newflake Posts: 5 From: Ohio Registered: Jul 2009
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posted June 30, 2005 04:27 PM
Forest could keep secrets Forest could keep secrets Forest tune in everyday To watersound and birdsong Forest letting her hair down To the teeming creeping of her forest ground But forest don't broadcast her business No forest cover her business down From sky and fast-eye sun And when night come And darkness wrap her like a gown Forest is a bad dream woman Forest dreaming about mountain And when earth was young Forest dreaming of the caress of gold Forest rootsing with mysterious eldorado And when howler monkey Wake her up with howl Forest just stretch and stir To a new day of sound But coming back to secrets Forest could keep secrets Forest could keep secrets And we must keep forest. --Grace Nichols (1950- ) Guyanese writerIP: Logged |
shop22much Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Dec 2010
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posted June 30, 2005 10:45 PM
Kahlil Gibran on Love When love beckons to you, follow him, Though his ways are hard and steep. And when his wings enfold you yield to him, Though the sword hidden among his pinions may wound you. And when he speaks to you believe in him, Though his voice may shatter your dreams as the north wind lays waste the garden.
For even as love crowns you so shall he crucify you. Even as he is for your growth so is he for your pruning. Even as he ascends to your height and caresses your tenderest branches that quiver in the sun, So shall he descend to your roots and shake them in their clinging to the earth.
Like sheaves of corn he gathers you unto himself. He threshes you to make you naked. He sifts you to free you from your husks. He grinds you to whiteness. He kneads you until you are pliant; And then he assigns you to his sacred fire, that you may become sacred bread for God's sacred feast.
All these things shall love do unto you that you may know the secrets of your heart, and in that knowledge become a fragment of Life's heart.
But if in your fear you would seek only love's peace and love's pleasure, Then is is better for you that you cover your nakedness and pass out of love's threshing-floor, Into the seasonless world where you shall laugh, but not all of your laughter, and weep, but not all of your tears. Love gives naught but itself and takes naught but from itself. Love possesses not nor would it be possessed; For love is sufficient unto love.
When you love you should not say, "God is in my heart," but rather, "I am in the heart of God." And think not you can direct the course of love, for love, if it finds you worthy, directs your course.
Love has no other desire but to fulfill itself. But if you love and must needs have desires, let these be your desires: To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To know the pain of too much tenderness. To be wounded by your own understanding of love; And to bleed willingly and joyfully. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving; To rest at the noon hour and meditate love's ecstasy; To return home at eventide with gratitude; And then to sleep with a prayer for the beloved in your heart and a song of praise upon your lips.
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posted July 02, 2005 05:18 AM
Teaselbaby, shop22much, I love these latest offerings!!LOL AT IP: Logged |
teaselbaby Newflake Posts: 5 From: Ohio Registered: Jul 2009
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posted January 23, 2006 07:21 AM
SERENADE by Edgar Allan Poe (1850)So sweet the hour, so calm the time, I feel it more than half a crime, When Nature sleeps and stars are mute, To mar the silence ev’n with lute. At rest on ocean’s brilliant dyes An image of Elysium lies: Seven Pleiades entranced in Heaven, Form in the deep another seven: Endymion nodding from above Sees in the sea a second love. Within the valleys dim and brown, And on the spectral mountain’s crown, The wearied light is dying down, And earth, and stars, and sea, and sky Are redolent of sleep, as I Am redolent of thee and thine Enthralling love, my Adeline. But list, O list, so soft and low Thy lover’s voice tonight shall flow, That, scarce awake, thy soul shall deem My words the music of a dream. Thus, while no single sound too rude Upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love. IP: Logged | |