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whiterabbit
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posted June 11, 2005 09:44 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for whiterabbit     Edit/Delete Message
I don't know what's wrong with me I've caught a case of poetry diahrrea...I wrote about a dozen today in a frenzy so I wanted to post a few. come on people, who else is gonna read these bodily fluids of mine? ahhhh.....I'm going crazy. ok here is the damn poem:


soon after 'o by the by' on page 68 my back light vilolet cotton inflamed with ugly sun through dirty glass handsome man ignoring me from the left one sparkly shoe off hot coffee at its last too sweet/milky millimetres soon after this I shrugged you off my hair skin lips and sense of sense and banished you to private poetry and nowhere else, forever.

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Jonathan Gull
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posted June 11, 2005 11:27 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jonathan Gull     Edit/Delete Message
awesome

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pixelpixie
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posted June 12, 2005 01:30 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pixelpixie     Edit/Delete Message
Thanks for coming.

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Bluemoon
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posted June 12, 2005 11:06 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Bluemoon     Edit/Delete Message
Awesome! I am feeling VERY creative for the past several weeks. Very insitful!!! I LOVE it. It seems to be effecting alot of people!!!!!!!!!!!

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future_uncertain
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posted June 12, 2005 11:32 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for future_uncertain     Edit/Delete Message
I love your style. Do you read Lyn Hejinian? This poem reminds me of her works. Beautiful!

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whiterabbit
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posted June 14, 2005 12:19 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for whiterabbit     Edit/Delete Message
pixie- was that a dirty comment?
Hey future, I'd never heard of Lyn Hejinian before but I just "googled" (what a funny word) her and I'm intrigued! Thanks for sharing.

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