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Topic: soon after 'o by the by'
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whiterabbit Knowflake Posts: 554 From: all over the place Registered: Aug 2004
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posted June 11, 2005 09:44 PM
I don't know what's wrong with me I've caught a case of poetry diahrrea...I wrote about a dozen today in a frenzy so I wanted to post a few. come on people, who else is gonna read these bodily fluids of mine? ahhhh.....I'm going crazy. ok here is the damn poem: soon after 'o by the by' on page 68 my back light vilolet cotton inflamed with ugly sun through dirty glass handsome man ignoring me from the left one sparkly shoe off hot coffee at its last too sweet/milky millimetres soon after this I shrugged you off my hair skin lips and sense of sense and banished you to private poetry and nowhere else, forever.
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Jonathan Gull Knowflake Posts: 65 From: the clouds Registered: May 2005
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posted June 11, 2005 11:27 PM
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pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 252 From: Ontario Canada Registered: Jun 2005
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posted June 12, 2005 01:30 AM
Thanks for coming. IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 1133 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted June 12, 2005 11:06 AM
Awesome! I am feeling VERY creative for the past several weeks. Very insitful!!! I LOVE it. It seems to be effecting alot of people!!!!!!!!!!! IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 1143 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted June 12, 2005 11:32 PM
I love your style. Do you read Lyn Hejinian? This poem reminds me of her works. Beautiful!IP: Logged |
whiterabbit Knowflake Posts: 554 From: all over the place Registered: Aug 2004
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posted June 14, 2005 12:19 PM
pixie- was that a dirty comment? Hey future, I'd never heard of Lyn Hejinian before but I just "googled" (what a funny word) her and I'm intrigued! Thanks for sharing. IP: Logged |