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Topic: Slightly adultish
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maya-v
Knowflake Posts: 1425
From: New York
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted June 13, 2005 04:10 PM
 
Oh what the heck ... I'll just post it and let you guys decide______________________________________________ Dark stormy night ... hiding away in a cave and just abt sunrise time
... one of those fiery sunrises ... almost bloody in its ferocity. The
smell of moist earth in the air pregnant with rich expectations of the
oncoming thunderous downpour ... deep dark woods, the mingled
fragrance of damp pine and oak ... the smell of horses, their
restlessness a real, present entity ... their hoofs adn whinnies a
suitable background note ... inside - pale, translucent fabric,
slightly rough and rich ... smiles and innocent glances .... Sliding hands callouses scraping, chaffing silken mocha skin
the rush of hot breath, whispers lost in the deep night of glossy dark hair ...
the intrigue of knowing glances the curve of a seductive smile
Wise eyes ... changing a million kaleidoscopic colors
every minute a new flavor of emotions and needs ... the tired wisdom of a boardwife
the cool detachment of a monk
the passionate need of Echo herself
the bitter humor of Aphrodite anger hurt love need passion desire possession power and the slick beat of a primal dance a slow expulsion of long held breaths
the moaning need of a feral creature the intense pride of a passionate beast
the tumultous estacy of a final release IP: Logged |
Devilfish
Knowflake Posts: 240
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Registered: Dec 2004
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posted June 13, 2005 05:32 PM
loved this
DELISHIP: Logged |
Bluemoon
Knowflake Posts: 1261
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005
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posted June 13, 2005 09:11 PM
hot, Maya!IP: Logged |
future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 1247
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted June 13, 2005 09:40 PM
I concur with hot, and I'd like to add perfectly subtle, too. I like this, Maya!Have you posted any of your pics again yet? I missed the old ones you had on there. I love putting faces with names when the name doesn't mind.  BTW,Devilfish... did you notice the word "delish" is in your name? I hereby dub you Devilfish-Delish! Has a nice ring, don't you think? IP: Logged |
Devilfish
Knowflake Posts: 240
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Registered: Dec 2004
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posted June 13, 2005 11:30 PM
hehe, i did notice AFTER i had posted and wondered if anyone else would,haha you did.IP: Logged |
Devilfish
Knowflake Posts: 240
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Registered: Dec 2004
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posted June 13, 2005 11:33 PM
Maya'
this poem has good awareness as in visuals ,aroma,feeling.IP: Logged |
Bluemoon
Knowflake Posts: 1261
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005
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posted June 14, 2005 08:29 AM
I noticed that also. I should lexi devilfish and see what i get......IP: Logged |
whiterabbit
Knowflake Posts: 561
From: all over the place
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted June 14, 2005 12:24 PM
I agree with devilfish, I can taste, smell, see it.. yum. So sensual. IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross
Knowflake Posts: 1528
From: north of Boston, MA
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted June 30, 2005 12:40 AM
I Love This, Maya.
Brilliant.
Very real.IP: Logged |
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