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Topic: Making Love to you...
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Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 163
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted June 29, 2005 05:50 PM
 
Making love to you I am…The colour in your eyes
The warmth of your breath
The scent of your skin
The sound of your voice You light me up with a brightness of ten thousand suns I am reminded of the first time I laughed
I am reminded of the first time I cried
I am reminded of the first time you said you’re mine
Your body trembles, pink lightening strikes
A carpet of rose petals, you take me to new heights
To a place beyond memory, where I cease to exist but… Being inside (you I am) totally alive.
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leoelf
Knowflake Posts: 334
From: In My Head
Registered: May 2005
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posted June 29, 2005 08:02 PM
Oh baby.Hot poem. IP: Logged |
pixelpixie
Moderator Posts: 625
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted July 04, 2005 03:17 PM
That is hot , how did I miss that.
I love when guys write poems about making love to me.
I should possibly date a poet.
*As no one has written one for me.*
That is my new ambition, to have a love sex poem written about me.
That'd be nice.
Wouldn't it?
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Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 163
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted July 05, 2005 04:12 PM
Thank you so much Pix...I'd like to think that making love is what poetry is all about! Actually I wrote this for a girl that I'm with at present, (We've not made love yet) but I was describing what I thought making love to her would be like...
Actually we were talking about kissing also and how one tends to start kissing only to get to a certain point, which is a shame really, because just kissing itself can be completely fulfilling!
If you place all of your attention on the kiss or just the holding of hands, when you can’t tell the difference between your tongue or hers or your hand and hers there is a oneness that can also be available by just looking into each others eyes…
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pixelpixie
Moderator Posts: 625
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted July 05, 2005 06:44 PM
Mmmmmmmmm.. kisses.
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Bluemoon
Knowflake Posts: 1313
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005
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posted July 06, 2005 12:57 AM
You are so wonderful, Akash! my love to you!!IP: Logged |
bleakbeauty
Knowflake Posts: 59
From: Australia
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted July 06, 2005 01:02 AM
Great poem...I just found that oneness with my fiance, after countless relationships which gave me no fulfillment.  IP: Logged |
ariestiger
Knowflake Posts: 630
From: UK
Registered: Jan 2004
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posted July 06, 2005 05:43 AM
Wow, Dynamic Stillness...I'd love to be able to feel what you describe...again...
that newness, that relaxed feeling with each other...free of past wrongs inflicted on one another...
I'd love to find someone who turned me on enough to do that...  AT
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Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 163
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted July 06, 2005 05:43 PM
Dearest AriestigerYou can feel that way this-very-moment!
This moment is free, it cares not for all that you have been through and neither does it care for all that you think you will go through...it is fresh and new and only you bring in the past, it is said that if one can die to the past then one can really live!
The person who walked through the door to sit down and read this is not the same person who will leave this place and go to another room! Life is new, right here, right now.
Turn yourself on!
Make love to yourself!
relax within your own heart, knowing that you dont keep it beating...something else does and it does because of love, to think that you are not the result of that love is arrogance :-) You are the light and warmth of the fire!
When you know this no-one will take it away from you just as no one can give it to you.
Hoping this finds you well, D.S IP: Logged |
Ann_Carnegie
Knowflake Posts: 9
From: Scarborough, Ontario, Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted July 06, 2005 10:07 PM
Wow what a beautiful poem!You are very intelligent when it comes to the way love should be expressed! When I was upset at my sister I wrote her a letter trying to explain that her approach to loving was wrong (although I was wrong for judging) and this came into my mind from some higher power above myself: "Love cannot take on the form of vanity, love is not the spoken word, but the creative pursuit it takes you on trying to express the depth of emotion you contain within towards another person." Love and light, Ann Carnegie
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Bluemoon
Knowflake Posts: 1313
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005
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posted July 07, 2005 11:00 PM
I am hoping you are well, my Akash!IP: Logged |
ariestiger
Knowflake Posts: 630
From: UK
Registered: Jan 2004
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posted July 08, 2005 07:27 AM
Dynamic Stillness...you write such beautiful words... AT IP: Logged |
Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 163
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted July 08, 2005 10:50 AM
Thank you all for the wonderful comments and for those who sent personal e-mails enquiring about me with regards to yesterday's attacks in London.
I sent out an e-mail to most contacts but for those who missed it:
Here are my thoughts:
It's was a crazy day, multiple bomb explosions on the underground and
buses followed by the panic of wondering if the people close to you
are okay. The fragility of life made visible by the invisible and to
live without a greater sense of awareness, sensitivity and depth from
this moment onwards is an insult to all those that have lost their
lives in circumstances such as these.Suddenly everything becomes clearer, and even the most ordinary event
such as a walk to work or a seat on the bus becomes meaningful. These types of situations 'blow away the mind' in the true sense of
that phrase. One is forced to be completely present with one's lover,
ones child, ones friend and oneself. Akash.
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Ann_Carnegie
Knowflake Posts: 9
From: Scarborough, Ontario, Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted July 08, 2005 08:49 PM
GOD bless you Akash. I hope all is well with you and your family.Love and Light, Ann IP: Logged |
26taurus
Moderator Posts: 8397
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted July 08, 2005 10:22 PM
quote:
One is forced to be completely present with one's lover,
ones child, ones friend and oneself.
 Glad you are okay Akash. IP: Logged |
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