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Topic: The Roar of Silence
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sugarlightning Knowflake Posts: 50 From: Ontario Registered: Nov 2003
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posted July 13, 2005 04:47 PM
Excerpt: I have heard the silence roar or was it the waves thrashing against the shore, causing the sound of thunder to rumble under the weight of heavy tides, as the sea slowly churns and rides, up majestically evermore, only to grace this livid beach with humble blessings once more; testing sands that lay beyond reach, and... as the tide returns to sea, my own soul flows back into me, having drifted somewhere between a half remembered, half forgotten dream that whispers hauntingly on the ocean mist.
Copyright@2005 by sugarlightning
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26taurus Moderator Posts: 8537 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted July 13, 2005 04:52 PM
Hauntingly beautiful. IP: Logged |
iAmThat Knowflake Posts: 757 From: Edison, NJ, USA Registered: Sep 2004
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posted July 13, 2005 11:31 PM
>>>as the tide returns to sea, my own soul flows back into me,Brilliant indeed
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Saturn's Child Knowflake Posts: 559 From: Just left of center Registered: May 2004
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posted July 14, 2005 10:09 AM
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Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 1358 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted July 14, 2005 04:15 PM
Lovely!!!IP: Logged |
Dynamic_Stillness Knowflake Posts: 168 From: London Registered: Dec 2004
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posted July 14, 2005 05:15 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!A MASTERPIECE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BRILLIANT..ABSOLUTLEY BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!! IP: Logged |
sugarlightning Knowflake Posts: 50 From: Ontario Registered: Nov 2003
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posted July 15, 2005 12:50 PM
Thanks for the kudos! The ocean always did have a particularly powerful effect on my psyche.
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iAmThat Knowflake Posts: 757 From: Edison, NJ, USA Registered: Sep 2004
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posted July 15, 2005 07:51 PM
An analogy ....Is it that when we breathe out the All breathes in and when we breathe in we are partaking of what the All breathes out
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sugarlightning Knowflake Posts: 50 From: Ontario Registered: Nov 2003
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posted July 15, 2005 11:08 PM
Hello, yes It could be intrepreted that way too IAmThat! I wrote from an experience during meditation near the ocean. I was also relating how I felt apart of that ocean; felt it as if it were moving inside of me. It was a haunting experience, as though I were almost remembering another life, something my heart remembers. Whenever I'm near water I feel peace, it calms and soothes me. (^_^)IP: Logged |