Posts: 1491
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted August 22, 2005 01:49 AM         

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Yes.
This is it.
Yes.
But.......
Then.......
Oh.
I thought.....
It felt........
Oh.

Was it only me
was I only projecting
Still it was opened
but now with no direction
a blossoming turned inward
ripened and full and once in bloom
the heavy petals will fall
unless they are tended
by more than dead air and fantasy
real nurturing inside of me
bark peeling off the big birch tree
I'm just fine and that's the difference
but it feels (instead of used)
undone
like someone
left precious metal to rust in the rain
untended lightening by a weathervane
half breath sighs before a shower
unmatched potential, endless power....
unknown and so full
so ripe
so right
not to manifest
a church pew without a footrest
lulling still, as if the carpenter will come once he's done the lunch
it was a deal after all, but MSG won't fill for long......
and people still belong
even if its wrong
I would be a friend if that is all I can be
and that is all I can be
Still, I dare him to see me.
Then we'll see.
If I read it wrong
even though I am literate and schooled and skilled
in the subtle.
It still stings a bit when I pop my bubble.

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted August 22, 2005 08:56 AM         

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"There is no use trying," said Alice; "one can't believe impossible things." "I dare say you haven't had much practice," said the Queen. "When I was your age, I always did it for half an hour a day. Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast." Lewis Carroll

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From: California, USA
Registered: Nov 2004

posted August 30, 2005 12:09 AM         

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That was beautiful Pix

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From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004

posted August 30, 2005 07:07 PM         

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Wow, pixie. I felt like I was reading my own thoughts. That was great.

Stay strong and walk on....
...Some people stay blind...

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From: UK
Registered: Jan 2004

posted August 30, 2005 07:32 PM         

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"untended lightning by a weathervane"

Wow.

That does it for me. You are IN TOUCH...

I want to cut out 'n' keep this poem!!!!!

AT

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posted August 30, 2005 10:31 PM         

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posted August 31, 2005 03:45 AM         

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Beautiful indeed! Thankyou.

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"...and dreams, don't ever forget, are the first step in manifesting wishes into reality"
-Linda Goodman

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From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted August 31, 2005 02:31 PM         

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Oh thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This one was definately from the heart.

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted September 01, 2005 05:24 AM         

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Loved it.

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"There is no use trying," said Alice; "one can't believe impossible things." "I dare say you haven't had much practice," said the Queen. "When I was your age, I always did it for half an hour a day. Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast." Lewis Carroll

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posted September 01, 2005 12:27 PM         

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From: Tn. USA
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posted September 07, 2005 04:07 AM         

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Wow! goosebumps...
Loved it Pix-pix,

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From: California, USA
Registered: Nov 2004

posted September 07, 2005 04:42 AM         

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Actually, I'm in a very similar situation to this one.. so now I really love it

Ahh it almost felt like ventilation for my own feelings reading that the second time, thanks.

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