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Topic: Because I'm Alone and It's a Late Friday Night: A Haiku for You
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proxieme unregistered
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posted September 09, 2005 11:19 PM
Here, Necessary Illusions by Noam Chomsky - Boring Flipping Book.IP: Logged |
proxieme unregistered
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posted September 09, 2005 11:20 PM
*bows to thunderous applause*No, really, really - roses are just too much. IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 4448 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted September 10, 2005 08:37 AM
lol, You are 2 funny, proxie! IP: Logged |
whiterabbit Knowflake Posts: 1226 From: the other side Registered: Aug 2004
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posted September 10, 2005 06:46 PM
very poignant. no, really, I dig it a lot.IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 5143 From: Ontario Canada Registered: Jun 2005
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posted September 12, 2005 01:21 AM
"Hiaku! Haiku very much!"IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 10736 From: Pleasanton, CA, USA Registered: May 2005
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posted September 12, 2005 11:58 PM
Sitting watching it A man is about to die; Compelling tvI really like this Writing haiku is quite fun Do you like it too? IP: Logged |
proxieme unregistered
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posted September 13, 2005 09:53 AM
"Haiku" means laughter for this jaded heart and mind - Wind rustling trees.~~~ Zoe, stinky dog - Nose hair and skin burn to dust. Why? You eat cat poo.
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AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 10736 From: Pleasanton, CA, USA Registered: May 2005
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posted September 13, 2005 07:54 PM
Nice!I started to write about our goofy male cat, but I couldn't quite capture his personality in Haiku, and it's not that he's so goofy really. He's just the friendliest cat ever, and still very playful for an adult. The only cat I know that comes when you call, and will seek to be the center of attention when people are around. Anyways... IP: Logged |
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posted September 13, 2005 11:18 PM
Is he black and white?IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 10736 From: Pleasanton, CA, USA Registered: May 2005
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posted September 14, 2005 02:04 AM
Nope. He's orange and white. IP: Logged |
proxieme unregistered
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posted September 14, 2005 09:22 AM
Ahh, OK - just checking. My Grandma has a running theory about B&W cats that's been backed-up by our cat, Harry (he acts just like yours).Wait - should that be in 5-7-5? IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 4448 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted September 14, 2005 10:05 AM
this is so funny Reading the words written here I like to write haikusI would like to go To a place far, far away calgon, take me now!!! IP: Logged |
proxieme unregistered
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posted September 14, 2005 01:51 PM
(In response to "Calgon: )Herbal Essences - A showering woman squeals. Me: No way, José. ~~~ Cat and Toddler run - Herding them: not possible... But Zoe will try.
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whiterabbit Knowflake Posts: 1226 From: the other side Registered: Aug 2004
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posted September 14, 2005 02:07 PM
I do not have pets if I did I'd like a sheep impossibly calmIP: Logged |
whiterabbit Knowflake Posts: 1226 From: the other side Registered: Aug 2004
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posted September 14, 2005 02:08 PM
quote: Cat and Toddler run - Herding them: not possible... But Zoe will try.
- this one is beautiful!IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 4448 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted September 14, 2005 05:03 PM
Most beautiful, yes Yes,I agree white rabbit the best haiku yet IP: Logged |
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posted September 14, 2005 05:39 PM
A goofing lady writing computer Haikus needs no accolades IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 2680 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted September 14, 2005 09:42 PM
Prox, you have some mad haiku skills! IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 4448 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted September 15, 2005 08:56 AM
Haiku to you,Prox This is really fun for me I will join the gameHaiku for my cat: Bunny is so sweet she has kittens, AGAIN they are really cute my daughter: A brat girl child says “you’re going to make my head explode”. That’s my line! IP: Logged |
Saturn's Child Knowflake Posts: 867 From: Just left of center Registered: May 2004
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posted September 16, 2005 01:55 AM
What clever lines here They make me smile and chuckle Dogs, kids, cats, and sheep All in a tub of calgon?IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 4448 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted September 16, 2005 08:57 AM
Sounds fun like monkeys Alot of monkeys in a barrell Do you bathe with sheep?IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 11979 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted July 11, 2007 08:07 PM
Bump this thread start the haiku fun again begun? (erm, will obviously have to learn a little more about how to write it properly) IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 11979 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted July 11, 2007 08:08 PM
HAIKU for PEOPLEIP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 2673 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted July 11, 2007 09:10 PM
In my poetry class files... lame forced artistry Haiku Traditional 5-7-5 syllables (loosely) Time rushes while weeks fly Chores beckon, as does the sky A deadline demands I sit on the porch A bunny hops in the darkness Soon it is Easter
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MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 2673 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted July 11, 2007 09:16 PM
I submitted these on a later date as penance, although she seemed to like the previous ones fine. She was always kind, but I remember she thought the final one here was "trite". Oh, if she only knew my emotion on that one. But if I don't convey it... it doesn't count! My favorite is the 2nd here, but I think they all relate nicely. Haiku non-traditional, English 3-5-3 syllables (11 syllables instead of 17)
Breathe your breath Gaze into your eyes See your heart Smoke curls up Meets polluted air We all dance In my arms Innocent angel Coos and smiles
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