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whiterabbit
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Posts: 886
From: Never, Never, Never Land
Registered: Aug 2004

posted October 05, 2005 05:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for whiterabbit     Edit/Delete Message
it answered to a song,
which spoke to a room
the curtains responded, they were wrapped around shoulders
indecisive shoulders, which whispered
"I'm not yours"
tell, tell me everything
what began,
what was like all fated meetings, cursed with
decisions that
eluded us,
that intrusive bearer of noble intentions and mania
passive with knowledge of darkness,
holds in its mind a hope of..
the meeting.
questioning our sexuality over cigarettes and coffee
deciding that we like it but we're lazy
that everybody who has fought, or had dreams of killing
should die with the leaves, brave but deluded
there is no final
final=
i-n-f-i-n-i-t-e
if only you gave up your seat to yourself
you could see that you were smiling while shouting
I want you to shout to me
the dying siren outside is like you,
it wants to tell of danger and emergency
but the immediacy of your kiss is rotten
it is a dead kiss which was buried one Autumn
under a bench that bore the words
ENTER, AND MAKE ME UNCOMFORTABLE
I LIE HERE AND I LIE ALWAYS
because angels like you are liars
and I join the ranks of the hungry ones
because we are asking for shelters that have been stolen
every new lover is a stolen shelter,
battered child who wants your arms to hide
if I betrayed some contract, I am sorry
what was written down got blown away by hurricanes
and no binding contract can keep my ankels locked to you
I kicked them off, left you a note
if you ever want to not want again, find me
I can show you how
if my name keeps burning itself into your haughty and selfish flesh
bite it off like the rotten bit
and write a song about how ugly it is to be haunted
by something which you never possessed
and write a song about that woman who was cruel and stupid
and could have had the universe like easy fruit
if only she hid a little more and laughed a little less
if only she let you tell her how it is
how is it,
by the way?
mocking is petty,
I will end with this
I didn't steal anything,
and maybe I am not,
I never was.
maybe
who will know,
who knows?


sorry this is long.. I am sitting in a library and "studying" but suddenly this jumped out of my fingers and I wanted to send it out like a liberated kite/slave. Random.

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AcousticGod
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From: Pleasanton, CA, USA
Registered: May 2005

posted October 05, 2005 08:08 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for AcousticGod     Edit/Delete Message
Very nice!

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Bluemoon
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Posts: 2294
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005

posted October 08, 2005 01:50 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Bluemoon     Edit/Delete Message

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future_uncertain
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From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted October 10, 2005 08:21 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for future_uncertain     Edit/Delete Message
Lovin' your stuff, whiterabbit!

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Lialei
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Registered: Jul 2005

posted October 10, 2005 10:23 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Lialei     Edit/Delete Message
that was so excrutiatingly painful to read, that I don't think I could ever bring myself to again.
Take that as an extreme compliment, whiterabbit. The impact of your words was deeply felt! violence answered...yes Indeed.

You are amazingly talented. I'm in awe and don't know what else to say.

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aqua
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Posts: 1237
From: dreamland
Registered: Jan 2004

posted October 11, 2005 12:34 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for aqua     Edit/Delete Message
that's beautiful ~whiterabbit~

an awasome creation!

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