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Topic: violence answered....
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whiterabbit Knowflake Posts: 886 From: Never, Never, Never Land Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 05, 2005 05:40 PM
it answered to a song, which spoke to a room the curtains responded, they were wrapped around shoulders indecisive shoulders, which whispered "I'm not yours" tell, tell me everything what began, what was like all fated meetings, cursed with decisions that eluded us, that intrusive bearer of noble intentions and mania passive with knowledge of darkness, holds in its mind a hope of.. the meeting. questioning our sexuality over cigarettes and coffee deciding that we like it but we're lazy that everybody who has fought, or had dreams of killing should die with the leaves, brave but deluded there is no final final= i-n-f-i-n-i-t-e if only you gave up your seat to yourself you could see that you were smiling while shouting I want you to shout to me the dying siren outside is like you, it wants to tell of danger and emergency but the immediacy of your kiss is rotten it is a dead kiss which was buried one Autumn under a bench that bore the words ENTER, AND MAKE ME UNCOMFORTABLE I LIE HERE AND I LIE ALWAYS because angels like you are liars and I join the ranks of the hungry ones because we are asking for shelters that have been stolen every new lover is a stolen shelter, battered child who wants your arms to hide if I betrayed some contract, I am sorry what was written down got blown away by hurricanes and no binding contract can keep my ankels locked to you I kicked them off, left you a note if you ever want to not want again, find me I can show you how if my name keeps burning itself into your haughty and selfish flesh bite it off like the rotten bit and write a song about how ugly it is to be haunted by something which you never possessed and write a song about that woman who was cruel and stupid and could have had the universe like easy fruit if only she hid a little more and laughed a little less if only she let you tell her how it is how is it, by the way? mocking is petty, I will end with this I didn't steal anything, and maybe I am not, I never was. maybe who will know, who knows? sorry this is long.. I am sitting in a library and "studying" but suddenly this jumped out of my fingers and I wanted to send it out like a liberated kite/slave. Random.
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AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 2791 From: Pleasanton, CA, USA Registered: May 2005
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posted October 05, 2005 08:08 PM
Very nice!IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 2294 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted October 08, 2005 01:50 PM
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 1534 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 10, 2005 08:21 AM
Lovin' your stuff, whiterabbit!IP: Logged |
Lialei Knowflake Posts: 140 From: Registered: Jul 2005
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posted October 10, 2005 10:23 AM
that was so excrutiatingly painful to read, that I don't think I could ever bring myself to again. Take that as an extreme compliment, whiterabbit. The impact of your words was deeply felt! violence answered...yes Indeed.You are amazingly talented. I'm in awe and don't know what else to say. IP: Logged |
aqua Knowflake Posts: 1237 From: dreamland Registered: Jan 2004
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posted October 11, 2005 12:34 AM
that's beautiful ~whiterabbit~ an awasome creation!
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