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From: detroit, mi, usa
Registered: Oct 2005

posted October 20, 2005 09:34 AM         

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You look at me
My soul rejoices
At your touch
My body rejoices
One day or a thousand years
All is the same
A moment or a lifetime
It matters not
When you look at me
Everything fades
Except you
Looking at me

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From: detroit, mi, usa
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posted October 20, 2005 09:54 AM         

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aaahhhhh, nobody liked my simple poem.....i shall go eat worms

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From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted October 20, 2005 10:47 AM         

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*ppppppppppppssssssst......
You gave it a half an hour!!!!!!

I like simple!
Enjoy your worms, impatient one.

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posted October 20, 2005 11:36 AM         

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Thank you Pix....Yours this morning was both moving and disturbing and I thouroghly enjoyed reading it..read it twice.....I am happy that you took the time to read mine. thanks.

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From: piopolis, quebec canada
Registered: Jul 2005

posted October 20, 2005 11:39 AM         

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sxycrzykewI221,

Perfect and simple
may I eat some worms with you
which do you like
the long skinny ones
or the fat juicy ones
hehe

I loved your poem
I needed to be reminded
thanks you dear sweet soul

Love and Light to ALL

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posted October 20, 2005 12:05 PM         

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lotus...
i picture you and i in a sandbox 4 or 5 yrs old with dirty knees making mudpies and eating fat juicy worms...couldnt be happier...eating our dirty worms ....
i have some questions for you later regarding yesterday, but i will post in your thread later.....i feel your kindness thru the wire, as sure as i feel pix's pain. art and poetry are so revealing, not easy to share innermost s-elf....thanks for joining me for a squirmy wormy brunch...love from michigan..kris

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From: piopolis, quebec canada
Registered: Jul 2005

posted October 20, 2005 12:52 PM         

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yes the sandbox
warms my heart
although I never ate any worms
or bugs
my mom yelled at me for eating red berries
she said they were go to sleep
berries, and I'd never wake up
I guess, that means they were poison
hehe

Never ate a bug either
I'm the one that puts the bug on paper
to bring it outside
my kids laugh at this
But, hehe, they do it too!

Talk soon

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From: ireland
Registered: Sep 2004

posted October 20, 2005 01:04 PM         

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Lovely poem.....very moving.......

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From: detroit, mi, usa
Registered: Oct 2005

posted October 20, 2005 01:40 PM         

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LOTUS:
i can't bring mys-elf to kill any living creature either....too funny....not a bug, not a spider, not a bee or orther thing that might sting me....just funny like that....anyway, never ate worms for real, but figurativly many times....try not to sit on that (**** )pot so much....my kids find my particularities funny too, but when i see my daughter doing the same things...take the bug outside..it warms me inside...like i used to warm them by putting thier coats in the dryer for 10 minutes before they went to the school bus on cold days...i even forget some of these things, but alas,,,they remember...

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