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Topic: a part, apart
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pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 2111 From: Ontario Canada Registered: Jun 2005
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posted October 28, 2005 02:30 PM
There are parts put away unjoined but connected to the whole in a way that makes them more special in their role like fingers you flex outside yourself you feel them move but don't control the movement it is separate but intertwined and sacred as what's inside a part apart
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geminstone Knowflake Posts: 516 From: Golden, CO Registered: Nov 2004
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posted October 29, 2005 05:08 AM
Very Cool, Pix! ~ geminstone IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 1807 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted October 30, 2005 10:06 PM
I read this a few days ago and posted, but my computer was being a jerkface and I forgot to come back and post.I guess you didn't need that! I just wanted to say that I liked your poem, and again, it's the rhythm that is uniquely your own. Identifiable and enjoyable as always. IP: Logged |
aqua Knowflake Posts: 1524 From: dreamland Registered: Jan 2004
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posted October 30, 2005 11:25 PM
beautiful! IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 3332 From: Pleasanton, CA, USA Registered: May 2005
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posted October 31, 2005 04:31 PM
Very interesting indeed! Nice thought! IP: Logged |
MAGUS of MUSIC Knowflake Posts: 1171 From: poughkeepsie,NY,usa Registered: Jun 2002
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posted October 31, 2005 06:25 PM
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sue g Knowflake Posts: 4088 From: ireland Registered: Sep 2004
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posted November 01, 2005 09:55 AM
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26taurus Moderator Posts: 9386 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 07, 2005 02:51 AM
Love that one, beautiful soul. Simple, profound.IP: Logged |
Lialei Knowflake Posts: 220 From: Registered: Jul 2005
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posted November 08, 2005 03:34 PM
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LeoSweetHeart Knowflake Posts: 459 From: California, USA Registered: Nov 2004
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posted November 09, 2005 03:29 PM
I feel ya IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 22684 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted November 10, 2005 07:29 AM
------------------ "There is no use trying," said Alice; "one can't believe impossible things." "I dare say you haven't had much practice," said the Queen. "When I was your age, I always did it for half an hour a day. Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast." Lewis Carroll IP: Logged |