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posted November 07, 2005 03:40 PM         

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Unvoiced, silent presence
felt through
ageless astral climbs
Deep Inner Passions
and True Character
that have no need to boast
or display
yet through the very Silence of modesty,
say~

no need of recognitions or confirmations of Desirability
except from anOther
Silent Heart that has yet to say
and sadly gets so easily swayed
by ego-veils yet to be
shattered as disillusions.

This Quiet Heart
soars onwards
to Eyes open enough to See
the In Visible

a Heart Loving and respectful
enough to Honor
a Precious Soul~
deserving of only such tenderness

a Soul Wise enough to decipher
all the lost Tao of the ages
and all the beautiful golden silences
of feelings felt beyond
superficial words.

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posted November 07, 2005 03:44 PM         

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Lialei,
that was absolutely beautiful, like you
thanks for sharing

Love and Light to YOU

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posted November 07, 2005 04:12 PM         

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Thank you for writing this!

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posted November 07, 2005 06:05 PM         

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Very nice!

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posted November 08, 2005 12:47 PM         

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posted November 09, 2005 02:18 AM         

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Wow.

Really beautiful, Lialei. Truly.

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What the caterpillar calls the end of the world the master calls a butterfly.
~Richard Bach

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posted November 09, 2005 09:40 AM         

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Thanks, 26

I haven't been sharing a lot of my poetry here, because I'm going through a period where it's hard to connect my thoughts and feelings to words. Never seems to come out as I truly feel or want it to lately.
This one included...only can hope it's comprehensable in some way to someone out there.

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posted November 09, 2005 11:21 AM         

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~Alainn~

xxx

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posted November 09, 2005 11:40 AM         

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Lialei!

As usual your words touch my heart an soul!
Keep writing lovely lady!

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posted November 09, 2005 03:22 PM         

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Lialei: I believe it is comprehensable to me.
And I understand about words not flowing.. they'll come back.. as evidenced by this poem.

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posted November 14, 2005 08:05 PM         

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posted November 15, 2005 02:13 AM         

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Lialei,

It was very comprehensable to me. Someone who often feels like the words arent there. Reaching to put feelings or thoughts into words that just cant be found or put together appropriately. Or something.....
I can relate to the period youre going through. And I'm glad youre expressing your beautiful s-Elf here. The poem actually reminded me of a friend of mine.
It's beautiful. Cant wait to read more of your work.

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posted November 15, 2005 03:58 AM         

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Gorgeous!!!!

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posted November 15, 2005 05:06 AM         

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You write the way it should be, really gentle and beautiful. Your words are pretty.

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posted November 18, 2005 02:16 PM         

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thanks for your kindness, guys.

I've been reading the poems posted in here the past week and I am amazed at the incredible talent here. Don't have the time to individually say what I would like to all of you...but I'm in Awe.

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posted November 19, 2005 03:47 PM         

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posted November 25, 2005 02:04 AM         

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I love this!

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posted November 25, 2005 07:56 AM         

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lovely !

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posted December 06, 2005 11:31 PM         

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I loooooooved that God did that hit close to home for me.

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posted December 06, 2005 11:42 PM         

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a Soul Wise enough to decipher
all the lost Tao of the ages

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Just beautiful! It made me want to cry the whole thing.

Thanks for the vision.

Love,

Goatgirl

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After silence, that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music." - Aldous Huxley

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posted December 07, 2005 11:05 AM         

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"There is no use trying," said Alice; "one can't believe impossible things." "I dare say you haven't had much practice," said the Queen. "When I was your age, I always did it for half an hour a day. Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast." Lewis Carroll

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posted December 08, 2005 01:55 AM         

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Revisited this brilliance.. yep, still see it.
awesome!!!!!!

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