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Planet_Soul
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From: The Universe
Registered: May 2005

posted November 12, 2005 05:41 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Planet_Soul     Edit/Delete Message
Ok its 2:30 a.m, and I had a bad day... I read some of your poems and they lifted my heart enough where I can now go to sleep. Half-asleep I wrote what came to mind, so bear with me here goes...

The Way I Love Chad

I love him in the way
The rain blessed me
When I opened my
Eyes to the sight of he
The most beautiful pair
Of Ocean blue
And Heavenly Seas
I followed him
Heart filled with despair
Afraid that somehow
He would be lost to me
A distant galaxy
The dust of a star
That is how I love him
With all of my heart

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lotusheartone
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From: piopolis, quebec canada
Registered: Jul 2005

posted November 12, 2005 10:19 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for lotusheartone     Edit/Delete Message
Planet Soul,
that was beautiful, thanks for sharing

Love and Light to YOU

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Charlotte
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From: Tn. USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted November 13, 2005 02:50 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Charlotte     Edit/Delete Message
Wow! That was wonderful for your first poem, You have talent!

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May the angel of your higher s-elf, guide you always.

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aqua
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From: dreamland
Registered: Jan 2004

posted November 13, 2005 11:02 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for aqua     Edit/Delete Message
oh Planet_Soul ,u r so amazing at the first shot !

can't wait to see more from you !

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Planet_Soul
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posted November 13, 2005 03:31 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Planet_Soul     Edit/Delete Message
Awww thanks you guys When I wrote that, I'd just got home from a lousy day at work and missed my Chad terribly. I get home at 2 a.m., and he works graveyard so we don't see each other as much anymore. I saved it and left it on the computer for him to find in the morning. He was pleasantly surprised

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