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Topic: My first poem
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Planet_Soul Knowflake Posts: 511 From: The Universe Registered: May 2005
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posted November 12, 2005 05:41 AM
Ok its 2:30 a.m, and I had a bad day... I read some of your poems and they lifted my heart enough where I can now go to sleep. Half-asleep I wrote what came to mind, so bear with me here goes...The Way I Love Chad I love him in the way The rain blessed me When I opened my Eyes to the sight of he The most beautiful pair Of Ocean blue And Heavenly Seas I followed him Heart filled with despair Afraid that somehow He would be lost to me A distant galaxy The dust of a star That is how I love him With all of my heart
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lotusheartone Knowflake Posts: 2638 From: piopolis, quebec canada Registered: Jul 2005
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posted November 12, 2005 10:19 AM
Planet Soul, that was beautiful, thanks for sharingLove and Light to YOU IP: Logged |
Charlotte Knowflake Posts: 390 From: Tn. USA Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 13, 2005 02:50 AM
Wow! That was wonderful for your first poem, You have talent! ------------------ May the angel of your higher s-elf, guide you always. IP: Logged |
aqua Knowflake Posts: 1577 From: dreamland Registered: Jan 2004
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posted November 13, 2005 11:02 AM
oh Planet_Soul ,u r so amazing at the first shot ! can't wait to see more from you !
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Planet_Soul Knowflake Posts: 511 From: The Universe Registered: May 2005
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posted November 13, 2005 03:31 PM
Awww thanks you guys When I wrote that, I'd just got home from a lousy day at work and missed my Chad terribly. I get home at 2 a.m., and he works graveyard so we don't see each other as much anymore. I saved it and left it on the computer for him to find in the morning. He was pleasantly surprised IP: Logged |