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From: Colorado
Registered: May 2009

posted January 04, 2006 10:12 PM            

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First of all I don't know how to write poem, so please correct me anything anybody want to correct. This is first time I am writing

Love makes me beautiful
Love makes my lips red
Love makes my cheeks blush
Love brings smile and dimples on my face
Love makes me more taller
Love brings shining in my hair
Love brings brightness in my eyes
Love soothes my heart
Love brings kindness in my heart
Love makes my everyday more charming and brighter
Love makes me forget all hurting things of the day
Love makes everything around me beautiful
Love makes my day pass very quickly
Love makes my dream colorful
Love gives me joy
Oh my God!! Am I the same person, or it is someone else.

Please help, how to write poem, I just tried to express whatever was coming in my mind.

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posted January 04, 2006 10:24 PM              

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sVirgo, it's BEaUtiful, just the way it
is, from your heart
with honesty
truly, Love

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From: Colorado
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posted January 04, 2006 10:32 PM            

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thank you!!
thank you for inspiring me!!

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posted January 04, 2006 11:34 PM            

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So honest!!! Beautiful!

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posted January 05, 2006 02:16 AM              

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sVirgo, its pure and simple

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posted January 05, 2006 09:09 AM            

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Thank you very much!!

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posted January 05, 2006 12:46 PM              

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Thats what loves does....he he he its Beautiful!! good job? are you feeling this now? I"m so happy for you if you are!!

love,Brandy /greeneyedgemini

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posted January 06, 2006 10:07 AM            

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Thank you Brandy!!
Yes, I am feeling it now.

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posted August 15, 2011 12:55 PM            

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bumping for L O V E !

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All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone

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posted September 09, 2011 10:54 AM            

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Very nice poem.

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posted September 16, 2011 07:56 AM            

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Love, love, love..

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Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.

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Linda Goodman

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