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Topic: The woman you see
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leo_on_fire
Knowflake Posts: 280
From: Heiskell, TN 37754
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted January 22, 2006 03:50 PM
 
It was like...watching a dream...
To see her move...
it made your heart pound
...and your breath became deeper...
The sway of her hips
..left...right...
Makes you wonder how she feels...
silk...or lace?
From her face...to her body...
...top to bottom...
She just...flows
...like water...
A simple tilt of her chins
...her eyes flash as they land on you...
She dances in circles
...it is almost...erotic..how she moves...
Fingers curling...arms beckoning
...so smooth...
It was like...watching a mirage
...surreal in quality...
You crave more
..golden hair swinging along...
She isn't perfect but
..she looks...so....
Hypnotizing....
You can't take your eyes off her...
...they are burning...
as are you...
...body..and soul...
It was like...watching a song
...a rhythm...
You found your heart beating along
...your eyes...catch hers
....Recognition...
The woman you see...
...I see you watching me...
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I hope it's ok to put this here..i hope it's not too...too. ------------------
Live your life without regret, don't be someone they forget. Your heart is not yours to keep, it's yours to give... Unknown IP: Logged |
poetsdream7
Knowflake Posts: 30
From: Holiday, Fl USA
Registered: Jan 2006
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posted January 27, 2006 10:25 PM
Hi, Leo,This poem was very sensual and lovely. Great imagery and emotion in this piece. I don't think its too-too, its simply a beautiful expression. ------------------
Always Seeking...poetsdream7 IP: Logged |
pixelpixie
Moderator Posts: 2890
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted January 28, 2006 12:13 AM
it is perfectly okay to put that there.. perfectly GREAT to put that there! Awesome!IP: Logged |
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