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Topic: Love's Lost Soul (Virgo Rising)
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poetsdream7 Knowflake Posts: 31 From: Holiday, Fl USA Registered: Jan 2006
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posted January 28, 2006 09:44 AM
This is a poem that expresses a world weary Virgo rising who finally found her wisdom by realizing that all is not perfect in love, and is quite content to be alone. Maybe I should just call it Virgo Rising...what do you think?Love's Lost Soul You see me as love's lost soul: Scarred heart jarred tight In bitter juices; Nerves jagged and splayed On skin's surface suffer The lightest touch. But bitterness is mine! My cleansing tonic That dissolves The dense sweetness Of sentiment. And this skin is mine, whole- Within this armor I'm free, Not lost, to see the limits Of your embrace. ------------------ Always Seeking...poetsdream7 IP: Logged |
bohemianjazz Knowflake Posts: 89 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Jan 2006
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posted January 28, 2006 01:26 PM
It's very beautiful Fits my brother perfectly since he has a Virgo Rising. He's leaning toward bachelorhood as he gets older. ------------------ 3rd Decan Scorpio Sun, 1st Decan Aries Moon, 1st/2nd Decan Aquarius Rising IP: Logged | |