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posted April 20, 2006 04:27 AM         

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The rich spring air so crisp so clean
on this warm spring day bring back the memories that will soon fade.
As we tread the cool waters of life we begin to see the horizon that the sun has made.

As we travel among the path that we chose,
we dare not make a sound
If we do we shall fall
far away from it all

Glistening among the waves of the journey that will soon be done.
We begin to fight a horrid battle that will soon be won.

As we travel among the path that we chose,
we dare not make a sound
If we do we shall fall
far away from it all

The journey is done
The war was won
Now a new life
has begun.

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posted April 21, 2006 03:27 AM         

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''Beginning''

Ghani

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posted April 21, 2006 01:44 PM         

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New Life

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From: usa
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posted April 21, 2006 06:43 PM         

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thank you ghani and acoustic for your insight but i already have a poem called "New Life"
so i think i would have to go with "begining"
thanks once again
P.S.
paras sucks
lol!

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posted April 22, 2006 10:04 PM         

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Soulstice.

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posted April 22, 2006 11:13 PM         

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ooooh good one pixel pixie ty

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posted April 23, 2006 01:26 AM         

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Thanks, glad you like dit....
but...
Paras doesn't suck.

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posted April 24, 2006 02:58 AM         

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i know paras doesnt suck it was a joke to him. i adore paras he is an amazing person

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