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paras
Knowflake

Posts: 1520
From: the Heart of It All
Registered: May 2004

posted May 03, 2006 07:58 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for paras     Edit/Delete Message
alone
spinning in the void
the vastness of this space
i tried so hard to avoid

i utter a soundless prayer
and you're not anywhere
near
to hear

life is paradox
and mine is no exception
life is a long, hard road
but mine goes in no direction
how useless i feel
just spinning my wheels

wherever it may take me,
give me traction, give me drive
give me a reason to be alive

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taurean_scorpion
Knowflake

Posts: 832
From: santa monica, california
Registered: May 2005

posted May 04, 2006 01:54 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for taurean_scorpion     Edit/Delete Message
i really like this; i can relate to it.
mind if i post it in my blog (written by paras)?

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paras
Knowflake

Posts: 1520
From: the Heart of It All
Registered: May 2004

posted May 04, 2006 09:42 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for paras     Edit/Delete Message
Go right ahead. I've always been of the opinion that one shouldn't post something up on the Internet unless one means for it to be shared. Besides, I find it quite flattering.

By the way, where's your blog? I just started one myself, earlier today. I'm a blogging newbie.

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taurean_scorpion
Knowflake

Posts: 832
From: santa monica, california
Registered: May 2005

posted May 04, 2006 11:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for taurean_scorpion     Edit/Delete Message
oOo
Thanks!
Well, it's my 'myspace'. i don't really write in it; it's mostly just quotes.
myspace.com/taurean_scorpion


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paras
Knowflake

Posts: 1520
From: the Heart of It All
Registered: May 2004

posted May 05, 2006 01:14 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for paras     Edit/Delete Message
Thanks, Taurean_scorpion.

Pixelpixie? I'm suprised you haven't posted anything here. I mean, I know it's short, and not my best work ever, but... got any reaction for me at all?

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spirited_pixie
Knowflake

Posts: 29
From: usa
Registered: Mar 2006

posted May 05, 2006 10:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for spirited_pixie     Edit/Delete Message
im sorry paras

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paras
Knowflake

Posts: 1520
From: the Heart of It All
Registered: May 2004

posted May 05, 2006 03:52 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for paras     Edit/Delete Message
spirited_pixie:

No worries.

Hey, I'm off work at 8pm tonight -- if you can, call me between 8:30 and 9:00, I'll tell you all about my morning. Things didn't go quite as well as I'd hoped, but nothing bad has happened, either. I'll be fine.

Sending you all the love in my heart,
Paras

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pixelpixie
Moderator

Posts: 3576
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted May 05, 2006 08:46 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pixelpixie     Edit/Delete Message
Oh paras, thanks for wanting my opinion.. it's fabulous! Especially that last line.

Sometimes I will assimilate something, and then forget to comment.. just appreciate to myself.
It is no less sacred, but I suppose the only way to know you've been touched is to tell it...
Sorry....

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