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Topic: Some Haiku's
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Charlotte
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posted May 13, 2006 05:39 AM
 
I've recently been learning the art of the haiku...
Thought I would share some that I've written.
Softly surrender
Butterfly wings, shivering
In his Hot embrace
 Early Morning Mist
Bare Skin against dew kissed grass
Feeling you in me
A taste of the sun
Ice freezing me to the core
Both there in your eyes 
The wind raging wild
Heart light as a child at play
Lightning striking near
Dreams that are surreal
Flowing water talks to me
A mermaid nearby
Fayries love to dance
A leprechaun hides his gold
wonder fills my eyes 
Love is eternal
Free to fly and yet still bound
For eternity
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pixelpixie
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Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 14, 2006 01:37 PM
Awesome!
You make me want to Hiaku!  IP: Logged |
Charlotte
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posted May 14, 2006 02:35 PM
Thank you! Pix-Pix...
I would love to see some of yours if you decide to Haiku.  ------------------
May the angel of your higher s-elf, guide you always. IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross
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posted May 15, 2006 12:43 AM
 Wow, Charlotte, these are so beautiful! You inspire me: A sensitive heart
finds beauty in the word "love"
and looks no further  take gentle care,
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Charlotte
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posted May 15, 2006 03:46 AM
Thank you! Heart Shaped cross, your Haiku makes a beautiful addition to the thread.  IP: Logged |
paras
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posted May 15, 2006 03:18 PM
Sorry, I've been meaning to reply to this for a couple days now -- just been real busy!Nice haiku'ing, Charlotte! Like Pixelpixie, it makes me want to join in, too. I just might.  Your second and last are my favorites. Nice job, too, HSC...  IP: Logged |
pixelpixie
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posted May 15, 2006 10:48 PM
He took me across
Then ended, with written word
My stark blossoming
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Charlotte
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posted May 15, 2006 11:46 PM
Oh, PIX-PIX, I think yours is very moving, beautiful and kinda' sad, you made me think girl. MORE!!!! LOLPares, Thank you!!! I would love to see one of yours... IP: Logged |
paras
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posted May 19, 2006 10:48 PM
I miss you too much
Eyes burning deep into mine
Our silent, pure loveIP: Logged |
Charlotte
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posted May 20, 2006 05:37 AM
awwww Paras, Very beautiful!IP: Logged |
Mysticknowflake
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