Posts: 1161
From: a fixedly mutable point of view
Registered: Aug 2004

posted June 08, 2006 03:55 AM         

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obscure; delinquent much like a memory-fragment from Outer descent-ing
lither than a weeping willow Story
a velvet bride of cups and smoke, perhaps hiding in the hawthorn
Queen as she may has believed beeen
atrocity
for a paragraph of misty thoughtless markeds influenllsion
pirt pire and pure, as never emaqiated dreamer I na course of
collide with parquette and Pis/s in associated bush,
(much like a deliberately placed song)
you was there. Mistaking the placement of propagandared rhetor
(ic
K
ici icle mavile keen and strought destroying the family Curtains
Yes-terday
since you left left another daze we fondly recall
like that stovetop cigarette and the polished little glace-attack, remorse, meaningful
you can’t sleep at night, I can tell
you that
busy faces in the street, I look around and see something pretty in the glimmer of foolish fools ohking the sounds around and the view of the grey bus again, corner muscles
red umbrella in all these years you see a trace of your foot army or vision you have seen
in another
City
walking by yourself,
cigarette a known habitual perpetration of
patience, you walk quickly as people in no hurries, never
always do
thinking more than you
admit, as per
usual
oh, a stone-cold Blues walking around woods, and this
urbanity
slow and woody,
you don’t have a lighter
but ain’t that the way it goesit
goes, place your finger on the
eternal yes-to-moday
caome, come on
doesn’t murder not like this
no fear, steel-randomizer-of Perpetuity
you’re wised, or just
intox
stop being an artist
you look better at work

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(please excuse my "creative" use of the English langu-age)

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Posts: 3815
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted June 09, 2006 11:57 AM         

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No excuse for brilliance!
I always look forward to your meander-ringers.
Then backward again.

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From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted June 09, 2006 08:37 PM         

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*applause*

Always love your brilliant creations, WR!

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From:
Registered: Jul 2005

posted June 11, 2006 02:51 AM         

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Have missed your poems here.
Daringly unique, whiterabbit.
What's more to love?

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