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Topic: My something good
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pixelpixie
Knowflake Posts: 5227
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted July 06, 2006 03:57 AM
 
I might not understand
The depth and the desire
But I will latch onto it
Like your living fire
And try not to analyze the pain
That comes before the loving
That letting go feeling
So pure and revealing
You make it so easy
I like to rile you up a bit
Like nothing’s worth working for unless it’s imperfect
And you are such a ‘perfect’ mate
That fate gifted me with
And of course, I never feel deserving
So I mess up
Even if it’s inside, it’s there
And so sometimes I push you away
Though you understand, finally, my say
sometimes comes from the parts that don’t matter
But the parts that do are vocal too
Only sometimes not directly at you
They are there when I glance at your lap
When I give that ass a playful slap
When I thank you for your clarity
Even though I only wanted to talk, you see
But you fix it, like my personal carpenter
Nailing in my tacks with tact
Might as well be crucified,
you know I’ll give some back
I just know what I lack
Better than anyone can tell me
So I stop the diatribe
The lessons and woman’s ability
Enough so you’ll just look at me
And see my apology
Clearly in my eyes
And I take your hand,
Woman to man
We’ve been through it before
I will kiss those pillow lips
The same ones for all these years
And my unmatched tears
will still flow,
Even though I know
You are forever
And even more
If it is within, then it is without
And I am without so much
Your eternal optimism makes me grateful
That mine is only surface but I have yours to feed from
So the next time I go away
Inside
You know you don’t have to hide
I know you’ll stay
No matter how many times I go away
That is durability
And stability
My moon is in tranquility
When this arrangement is met and understood
Yes, you are my something good.
* my Capricorn Moon in the sixth house take on romance with another Capricorn Moon*
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D for Defiant
Knowflake Posts: 1325
From:
Registered: May 2006
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posted July 06, 2006 10:29 AM
pixelpixie   I don't know what to say to express exactly how I really feel...all I can say right now is this is great work...you've touched and demonstrate Love in a beautifully, poeticly humane way. It is filled with Love I don't know if you like or don't like the movie "Good Will Hunting", but, you reminded me of Sean (Robin Williams) talking to Will (Matt Damon) about his late wife, and what we call "imperfections" are in fact the things we should treasure...it all depends on our own definitions of "perfection" and of "imperfection"- and when it comes to my beloved- he is human, he has his own "vices and virtues", and he is perfect to me  ------------------
May not be able to get back to you...appreciate your say nevertheless...D IP: Logged |
sue g
Knowflake Posts: 8591
From: former land of the leprechaun
Registered: Sep 2004
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posted January 12, 2007 09:12 AM
Oh I missed this.... How could I have....? Magnificent Pixie poet one IP: Logged |
Bluemoon
Knowflake Posts: 4456
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005
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posted January 13, 2007 02:52 PM
Did your write this close to your time of conception???IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross
Knowflake Posts: 6778
From: 11/6/78 11:38am Boston, MA
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted January 15, 2007 01:54 AM
Pixie,
This is good work. Really.
Anything else i say will sound trite. You humble me. s
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pixelpixie
Knowflake Posts: 5227
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted January 16, 2007 05:24 PM
Oh thank you for bumping this!Yes, I posted it again in a Cappy Moon section is soul unions. I was pregnant, but didn't know it yet. I appreciate the comment, I surely do.
Love is such a simple and all at once complicated thing.
Sometimes to express it, you must be both.
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future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 2681
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted February 03, 2007 01:08 PM
Another bump and a thumbs up.You delight us, Pixie friend! Now let's go make out! All of us. Everyone. Just the mood I'm in, I guess. I love everyone and no one but myself. Within, without and all the layers inbetween. A quietly trembling concealed mania waiting to explode. IP: Logged |
MysticMelody
Moderator Posts: 3370
From:
Registered: Dec 2005
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posted February 03, 2007 03:01 PM
Thanks for bumping this... I almost missed it!
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pixelpixie
Knowflake Posts: 5227
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted February 05, 2007 03:10 AM
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sinderlou
Knowflake Posts: 978
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Registered: Jan 2007
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posted February 05, 2007 07:38 AM
THis is really awesome!IP: Logged |
pixelpixie
Knowflake Posts: 5227
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted March 14, 2008 02:36 AM
Gosh It's been over a year since I saw this.I can't sleep so I am revisiting my past a bit.
I like this one. I have to make time to write when there is no baby on my lap. He really is my something good. Then we make my something better together IP: Logged |
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