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From: Ohio
Registered: Mar 2006

posted July 14, 2006 01:58 PM         

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Her soul stirs, remembering long ago, the contour, the face; the words she heard from another time another place.

The eyes she knows, looked inside many times. He's sleeping now peacefully, she thinks of the wheel half way around; the regret, the ruin; what brought them down.

She turns to leave, looks back once more, wishing she could tell him all that she knows, for she could see the future and what it beholds, but fate would'nt have it, and looking beyond the door began to close.

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From: Meet me in Montauk
Registered: Jun 2006

posted July 19, 2006 02:59 AM         

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I liked this one a lot...can relate to it a lot too..:/

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"WHATEVER the soul longs for, WILL be attained by the spirit"

"Love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"

-Khalil Gibran

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Registered: Dec 2005

posted July 23, 2006 01:45 AM         

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Wow, I loved that!

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