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Topic: Whilst you are sleeping...
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greycat Knowflake Posts: 136 From: Australia Registered: Sep 2004
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posted December 08, 2006 02:38 PM
Somewhere our small universes touch when you are and I'm not sleeping much, satin murmurs, the darkness fusses and your appearance, like a wave, surpasses. In the shell of your belly button, summer is wintering, you keep crumbs of sun for us, your touch and desire start rhyming... when you like a wave caress. The silver of December plots a ring for your finger, downwards your hand a star is falling, To no avail I hold you so tight, You, like a wave, linger... Don't leave salty clear drops here, you've already swarmed smells through the air, leaving delusive deposit full of foam, In the heart of this broken stone... Nothing else matters anymore... The face of Earth, evil and false, opens the door, and everyone becomes sand, abject and tiny, under us sore...IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 10639 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted December 09, 2006 01:19 AM
you are one seriously talented poet, greycat.i love your writing. especially this one. thanks for sharing that with us. IP: Logged |
Wednesday Knowflake Posts: 583 From: The big C... Canada :) Registered: Jul 2006
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posted December 09, 2006 09:33 AM
WOW.IP: Logged |
lotusheartone Knowflake Posts: 8258 From: piopolis, quebec canada Registered: Jul 2005
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posted December 09, 2006 11:37 AM
Greycat..Simply Amazing! IP: Logged |
greycat Knowflake Posts: 136 From: Australia Registered: Sep 2004
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posted December 10, 2006 11:16 AM
wow thank you guys I didn't expect this. greatly appreciated!Love to you all! IP: Logged |
BornUnderDioscuri Knowflake Posts: 353 From: Never Never Land Registered: Oct 2006
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posted December 10, 2006 02:36 PM
This is sooo beautiful! You're awesome!IP: Logged |