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From: A temporary home
Registered: May 2004

posted January 03, 2007 09:03 AM         

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Normally I don't like writing my poems online, but I thought I would share this one with you guys, as it is short and sweet. I wrote it last night.

Why do I dream the dreams I dream
where you appear out of the corner of my eye?
I don't want you there,
I want you here.

Nothing ever goes my way
as you always just walk away
into the murkiness of my dreams.
But it's not what it seems
as I wake up and find you
beaming at me!

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From: former land of the leprechaun
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posted January 03, 2007 12:42 PM         

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Aaaah lovely Yang!!!

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posted January 05, 2007 09:09 AM         

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Ahh thanks Sue g

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posted January 05, 2007 05:19 PM         

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This is interesting... is there a specific meaning behind this?

Let's discuss!

(Only if you're up for it. The artist certainly has the right to leave his work open to interpretation!)

Nice!

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From: A temporary home
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posted January 06, 2007 09:47 AM         

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Actually it kinda weird how I came to write this poem. I went to bed and I had this dream ( can't remember much of it) and I suddenly woke up. While I was trying to fall back to sleep, some of the lyrics in the poem kept on going round and round my head. So, I got up and started writing the poem, based on these words in my head.
The poem and the dream have nothing in common.

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posted January 08, 2007 09:15 AM         

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*Bump*

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posted January 09, 2007 01:56 PM         

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"There is no use trying," said Alice; "one can't believe impossible things." "I dare say you haven't had much practice," said the Queen. "When I was your age, I always did it for half an hour a day. Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast." Lewis Carroll

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posted January 13, 2007 02:54 PM         

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nice, I love it Yang

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posted January 15, 2007 06:55 AM         

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Thanks Bluemoon

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