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Topic: Daydreams
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NosiS Knowflake Posts: 170 From: Orlando, FL USA Registered: Apr 2004
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posted August 21, 2007 02:44 AM
Daydreams there is a seekers' search, slyly sneaking past awareness,
that is bound by a yielding memory's consecrated consequences. i've felt the force in feeling, the momentum in these creviced moments, as i slip down the cloven pathways in my mind. my heart stirs every time. these portioned pieces of film-like past, my memories of moments passed, are bound to me by flightless feelings--steep emotions flailed while reeling. it whips my soul and slows the spooling as my mind's eye slips into a cautious brooding. why do i see this? why do i re-member? is it i that hold the reins of clouds of thought that drown like thunder? in here, the past is present sewn; the embers weld the Mind and Soul. IP: Logged |
lotusheartone Knowflake Posts: 11543 From: Heaven Registered: Jul 2005
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posted August 21, 2007 02:52 AM
Knowing Thanks, for sharing U LOve to ALL. ... IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 2273 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted August 22, 2007 10:24 AM
I love the alliteration and rhyme here, NosiS. And, of course, I love this line: "portioned pieces of film-like past" Very nice and worth reading more than once.
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26taurus Knowflake Posts: 11450 From: Thee you of we Registered: Jun 2004
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posted August 22, 2007 04:41 PM
......quintessence...... "_ _" (that word came to me...thought i should post it ) lovely poem. IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Knowflake Posts: 2273 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted August 22, 2007 09:27 PM
Quintessencea much better Word of the Day than any of my Word of the Day subscriptions... brilliant woman!
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NosiS Knowflake Posts: 170 From: Orlando, FL USA Registered: Apr 2004
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posted August 22, 2007 10:21 PM
lotus,You are welcome. Thank you for reading. MysticMelody, Alliteration is my Achilles heel. I have written much where it is overdone. Thank you for your kindness. 26taurus, You put butterflies in my stomach. Thank You, all! IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 11450 From: Thee you of we Registered: Jun 2004
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posted August 23, 2007 03:26 PM
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26taurus Knowflake Posts: 11450 From: Thee you of we Registered: Jun 2004
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posted August 23, 2007 03:27 PM
MM ~ IP: Logged |