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NosiS
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From: Orlando, FL USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted August 21, 2007 02:44 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
Daydreams


there is a seekers' search, slyly sneaking past awareness,

that is bound by a yielding memory's consecrated consequences.

i've felt the force in feeling, the momentum in these creviced moments,

as i slip down the cloven pathways in my mind. my heart stirs every time.

these portioned pieces of film-like past, my memories of moments passed,

are bound to me by flightless feelings--steep emotions flailed while reeling.

it whips my soul and slows the spooling as my mind's eye slips into a cautious brooding.

why do i see this? why do i re-member? is it i that hold the reins of clouds of thought that drown like thunder?

in here, the past is present sewn; the embers weld the Mind and Soul.

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lotusheartone
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From: Heaven
Registered: Jul 2005

posted August 21, 2007 02:52 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for lotusheartone     Edit/Delete Message
Knowing

Thanks, for sharing U

LOve to ALL. ...

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MysticMelody
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posted August 22, 2007 10:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for MysticMelody     Edit/Delete Message
I love the alliteration and rhyme here, NosiS.

And, of course, I love this line:

"portioned pieces of film-like past"


Very nice and worth reading more than once.

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26taurus
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Posts: 11450
From: Thee you of we
Registered: Jun 2004

posted August 22, 2007 04:41 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
......quintessence......

"_ _"

(that word came to me...thought i should post it )

lovely poem.

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MysticMelody
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posted August 22, 2007 09:27 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for MysticMelody     Edit/Delete Message
Quintessence

a much better Word of the Day than any of my Word of the Day subscriptions...

brilliant woman!

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NosiS
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Posts: 170
From: Orlando, FL USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted August 22, 2007 10:21 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
lotus,

You are welcome. Thank you for reading.

MysticMelody,

Alliteration is my Achilles heel. I have written much where it is overdone. Thank you for your kindness.

26taurus,

You put butterflies in my stomach.

Thank You, all!

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26taurus
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Posts: 11450
From: Thee you of we
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posted August 23, 2007 03:26 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message

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26taurus
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From: Thee you of we
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posted August 23, 2007 03:27 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
MM ~

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