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26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 21, 2007 11:13 PM
Hey gang, I just learned about a little something called the Cinquain in my web travels. Linking our cinquains together might make for a fun game.What it is: some examples can be found here: http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/cinquain.html Cinqku, lanterne, tetractys, and quintiles are examples of variations of the Cinquain type of five-line image form. Other quintain forms can be in the style of English quintets, individual French cinquains, individual Quintillas, five line blank or free verse and Fib (poetry)in its five line version. Adelaide Crapsey and William Soutar are perhaps the most well-known poets of the American cinquain image form. Cinqku is a fixed-form five line tanka or cinquain image poem with no title, 17 syllables, with a surprise or turn in line 4 or 5. This concise form was created by Denis Garrison, an American poet. Lanterne is a five line quintain verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.Each line usually able to stand on its own as a phrase,and the poem may or may not have a title which sometimes forms an integral part as a 'sixth line.' A tetractys is five-line poem of 20 syllables with a title, arranged in the following order: 1,2,3,4,10.with each line standing as a phrase on its own. This form was created by the late English poet Ray Stebbings. Quintiles are multiple American cinquains, centered on a common theme, that are linked to form a longer poem. The tanka in its modern English form is the basis of each of the quintain image forms. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cinquain IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 21, 2007 11:16 PM
How to Play:It's simple. Take the last line from the last cinquain posted and make it the first line in your own cinquain. I'll start: IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 21, 2007 11:33 PM
Silver links Lining up pouring rain, down a pen letters puddle, painting pictures set free
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NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 22, 2007 01:27 AM
Set free By fire of breath - To BE is to know IS While to KNOW needs no verbiage In dreams.(i hope i did this right ) IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 22, 2007 01:58 AM
yes! (though if you left out "by" in the second line, that would make it four syllables) IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 22, 2007 12:44 PM
doh!that's funny...i wrote that thinking of "fire" as one syllable. I'm not going to abuse my poetic license so here's the correction (which i've ended up liking better anyway) : Set free Fire of Breath - To BE is to know IS While to KNOW needs no verbiage In dreams. IP: Logged |
goatgirl Knowflake Posts: 1168 From: Anywhere Registered: Jul 2002
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posted November 22, 2007 09:10 PM
In dreams, anything is. You will be what you want. Manifest your reality In Life.
------------------ We are weaving character every day, and the way to weave the best character is to be kind and to be useful. Think right, act right; it is what we think and do that makes us who we are. ~ Elbert Hubbard IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 22, 2007 09:34 PM
Nice one, goatgirl! In Life There are forces That you may not control. Be wary of the things you can 'Til Death. IP: Logged |
juniperb Knowflake Posts: 7208 From: Blue Star Kachina Registered: Mar 2002
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posted November 22, 2007 09:53 PM
'Til Death The flower stands Sentinel on the hill Seeking tara`s silent gaze Adoring (most likely not proper but the sentiment remains)
------------------ ~ What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world is immortal"~ - George Eliot IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 23, 2007 03:19 AM
I LOVED those! You three are good!!! juni, sentiment is really all that matters . And I love a rule-breaking Aquarian. Glad the thread is taking off. I'll have to come back tomorrow to play. It's been a long day/night.
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NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 23, 2007 11:57 AM
juniperb, very powerful! Adoring Children playing, Soon to seek religion Though in the midst of antics, they, Angels are.
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26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 23, 2007 09:12 PM
Angels are Angled On High Announcing their Presence Ambient calls, beating in hearts AnsweredIP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 23, 2007 09:24 PM
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NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 23, 2007 11:22 PM
Answered Is the Question - Complementary toll Of a seer's searing measure To askIP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 23, 2007 11:34 PM
To ask Is quite a task To be, is to bask - in Golden rays, we hide behind a Mask kinIP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 24, 2007 01:53 AM
(i'm bored so i will go off of my own )M ask kin A bond within S ad faces, dripping tears K ids, brothers by prick of a pin Circus IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 24, 2007 02:24 PM
Circus: Circles in us Are certain to invite And burst as bubbles, giving life A square.
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goatgirl Knowflake Posts: 1168 From: Anywhere Registered: Jul 2002
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posted November 24, 2007 03:43 PM
A square Equals ninety Degrees not in nature Nature prefers circular things To share------------------ We are weaving character every day, and the way to weave the best character is to be kind and to be useful. Think right, act right; it is what we think and do that makes us who we are. ~ Elbert Hubbard IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 24, 2007 10:17 PM
To share Is to find love, For sharing is the act. Kindnessspeaks as tesseracts in Motion.IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 24, 2007 11:03 PM
Motion Change position Continuous physics Momentum, time, velocity Einstein IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 25, 2007 12:45 AM
Einstein: "A question that sometimes drives me hazy: am I or (are) the others crazy?" Wonder..IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 25, 2007 01:07 AM
Wonder Is as under As the rainbow is light. Asunder is this Holiness Made bright.IP: Logged |
26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15128 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted November 26, 2007 11:45 PM
Made bright Shadows of night By the fullness of moon The necklace of streetlights, puts out The starsIP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 27, 2007 11:16 AM
The stars Are inside me! So cosmological And immeasurable is m[I] Spirit!IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 1453 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted November 27, 2007 11:28 PM
Spirit In the forests - Moisture bleeds Its aplomb. The Song of God plays ever on In mI.*edited to add: hah! That combination of letters reminds me of a forest... In mI ImminInniimIImmmnIimiInnIIinInnmmIiIIm IP: Logged |