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26taurus
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posted November 21, 2007 11:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
Hey gang, I just learned about a little something called the Cinquain in my web travels. Linking our cinquains together might make for a fun game.

What it is:


  • a stanza of five lines; specifically, one that has successive lines of two, four, six, eight, and two syllables.

    The traditional cinquain is based on a syllable count.

  • line 1 - 2 syllables
  • line 2 - 4 syllables
  • line 3 - 6 syllables
  • line 4 - 8 syllables
  • line 5 - 2 syllables

    The modern cinquain is based on a word count of words of a certain type.

  • line 1 - one word (noun) a title or name of the subject
  • line 2 - two words (adjectives) describing the title
  • line 3 - three words (verbs) describing an action related to the title
  • line 4 - four words describing a feeling about the titlem, a complete sentence
  • line 5 - one word referring back to the title of the poem

some examples can be found here: http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/cinquain.html

Cinqku, lanterne, tetractys, and quintiles are examples of variations of the Cinquain type of five-line image form. Other quintain forms can be in the style of English quintets, individual French cinquains, individual Quintillas, five line blank or free verse and Fib (poetry)in its five line version.

Adelaide Crapsey and William Soutar are perhaps the most well-known poets of the American cinquain image form. Cinqku is a fixed-form five line tanka or cinquain image poem with no title, 17 syllables, with a surprise or turn in line 4 or 5. This concise form was created by Denis Garrison, an American poet.

Lanterne is a five line quintain verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.Each line usually able to stand on its own as a phrase,and the poem may or may not have a title which sometimes forms an integral part as a 'sixth line.'

A tetractys is five-line poem of 20 syllables with a title, arranged in the following order: 1,2,3,4,10.with each line standing as a phrase on its own. This form was created by the late English poet Ray Stebbings.

Quintiles are multiple American cinquains, centered on a common theme, that are linked to form a longer poem. The tanka in its modern English form is the basis of each of the quintain image forms. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cinquain

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26taurus
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posted November 21, 2007 11:16 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
How to Play:

It's simple. Take the last line from the last cinquain posted and make it the first line in your own cinquain.

I'll start:

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26taurus
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posted November 21, 2007 11:33 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
Silver
links Lining up
pouring rain, down a pen
letters puddle, painting pictures
set free

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NosiS
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posted November 22, 2007 01:27 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
Set free
By fire of breath -
To BE is to know IS
While to KNOW needs no verbiage
In dreams.

(i hope i did this right )

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26taurus
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posted November 22, 2007 01:58 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
yes!

(though if you left out "by" in the second line, that would make it four syllables)

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posted November 22, 2007 12:44 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
doh!

that's funny...i wrote that thinking of "fire" as one syllable. I'm not going to abuse my poetic license so here's the correction (which i've ended up liking better anyway) :

Set free
Fire of Breath -
To BE is to know IS
While to KNOW needs no verbiage
In dreams.

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posted November 22, 2007 09:10 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for goatgirl     Edit/Delete Message
In dreams,
anything is.
You will be what you want.
Manifest your reality
In Life.

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We are weaving character every day, and the way to weave the best character is to be kind and to be useful. Think right, act right; it is what we think and do that makes us who we are. ~ Elbert Hubbard

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posted November 22, 2007 09:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
Nice one, goatgirl!

In Life
There are forces
That you may not control.
Be wary of the things you can
'Til Death.

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posted November 22, 2007 09:53 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for juniperb     Edit/Delete Message

'Til Death
The flower stands
Sentinel on the hill
Seeking tara`s silent gaze
Adoring


(most likely not proper but the sentiment remains)

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What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world is immortal"~

- George Eliot

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26taurus
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posted November 23, 2007 03:19 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
I LOVED those!

You three are good!!!

juni, sentiment is really all that matters .
And I love a rule-breaking Aquarian.

Glad the thread is taking off. I'll have to come back tomorrow to play. It's been a long day/night.

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posted November 23, 2007 11:57 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
juniperb, very powerful!

Adoring
Children playing,
Soon to seek religion
Though in the midst of antics, they,
Angels are.

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posted November 23, 2007 09:12 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
Angels are
Angled On High
Announcing their Presence
Ambient calls, beating in hearts
Answered

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posted November 23, 2007 09:24 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message

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posted November 23, 2007 11:22 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
Answered
Is the Question -
Complementary toll
Of a seer's searing measure
To ask

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posted November 23, 2007 11:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
To ask
Is quite a task
To be, is to bask - in
Golden rays, we hide behind a
Mask kin

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posted November 24, 2007 01:53 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
(i'm bored so i will go off of my own )

M ask kin
A bond within
S ad faces, dripping tears
K ids, brothers by prick of a pin

Circus

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posted November 24, 2007 02:24 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
Circus:
Circles in us
Are certain to invite
And burst as bubbles, giving life
A square.

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posted November 24, 2007 03:43 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for goatgirl     Edit/Delete Message
A square
Equals ninety
Degrees not in nature
Nature prefers circular things
To share

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We are weaving character every day, and the way to weave the best character is to be kind and to be useful. Think right, act right; it is what we think and do that makes us who we are. ~ Elbert Hubbard

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posted November 24, 2007 10:17 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
To share
Is to find love,
For sharing is the act.
Kindnessspeaks as tesseracts in
Motion.

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posted November 24, 2007 11:03 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
Motion
Change position
Continuous physics
Momentum, time, velocity
Einstein

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posted November 25, 2007 12:45 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
Einstein:
"A question that
sometimes drives me hazy:
am I or
(are) the others crazy?"
Wonder..

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posted November 25, 2007 01:07 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
Wonder
Is as under
As the rainbow is light.
Asunder is this Holiness
Made bright.

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posted November 26, 2007 11:45 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
Made bright
Shadows of night
By the fullness of moon
The necklace of streetlights, puts out
The stars

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posted November 27, 2007 11:16 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
The stars
Are inside me!
So cosmological
And immeasurable is m[I]
Spirit!

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posted November 27, 2007 11:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for NosiS     Edit/Delete Message
Spirit
In the forests -
Moisture bleeds Its aplomb.
The Song of God plays ever on
In mI.

*edited to add:

hah! That combination of letters reminds me of a forest...

In mI ImminInniimIImmmnIimiInnIIinInnmmIiIIm

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