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writesomething
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From: meet me in montauk
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posted January 08, 2008 09:06 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for writesomething     Edit/Delete Message

leave me
never alone
i dont want you
but youre the only
thing i love
swollen lungs
from swimming
in your flood
i cant love you
but i live in your flood

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NosiS
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MysticMelody
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posted January 08, 2008 03:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for MysticMelody     Edit/Delete Message
I want the last line to be:

"But you live in my blood"

then I want to immediately know more than the 6 chords I know on my guitar so can I burst out into song *air guitar*

I know, I know... I take perfectly good emotion and art and smoosh it into an easily edible pop tart.


Wash dishes and let it all go down the drain, Write. Until your lungs feel better anyway.
Then when the flood clears and you are standing on solid ground, decide if and when you want to jump back in. Swimming can fun and less painful than drowning if a few precautions are implemented. Surf boards, rafts and even docks are also useful. I hope you see the life-ring I just threw. Sorry if I hit you in the head with it. I can be strong-armed and a klutz. I have good intentions though.

With love...

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