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Heart--Shaped Cross
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posted January 24, 2008 04:56 PM
  
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MysticMelody
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posted January 25, 2008 02:47 PM
Your "in progress" looks like the finished thing. What if you used a poem or a "wit and wisdom" ditty to introduce each section and use small sections like, well, NOT like Leonard, sort of, but long post sized instead and it will be called "Musings of a Modern Day Philosopher". Yeah, I know you already have your loooong list of book titles.  Better get busy. hehe  Lotza good Cappie energy for a while.
http://www.soyouwanna.com/site/syws/publishbook/publishbook.html I think this is the one my sister had me write down on that slip though I can't find it atm. Eleanore mentioned soyouwanna on another thread a week or two ago and it reminded me.
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Heart--Shaped Cross
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posted January 25, 2008 03:14 PM
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dafremen
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posted January 27, 2008 12:40 AM
I'm seeing things I should';t see
Knowing things I shouldn't know
Going places I have gone beforeRepetitious mysteries
Those never been before this time
But ever must be now that I
Am in the show
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Heart--Shaped Cross
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posted January 29, 2008 07:02 PM
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Heart--Shaped Cross
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posted January 29, 2008 07:04 PM
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MysticMelody
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posted January 30, 2008 10:44 AM
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Heart--Shaped Cross
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posted January 30, 2008 11:37 AM
When Soul opens, you fall in.It's as simple as that. You don't say to Soul, "Not now, Soul,
I'm on my way to meet Spirit." That always makes Soul laugh. "Not without me you're not," she says, as you slip ever deeper inside her... IP: Logged |
dafremen
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posted January 30, 2008 08:45 PM
Sort of an evolution from thoughts on
Gene SpragueRamblings of the easy chair
Calling me to sit and stare
Wakening from the heavenly
To my apathy
With the greatest ease Don't want to stay awake
But I can't sleep all day
If dreams were life I'd pray
Maybe dream my life away
If dreams were life
I'd stay awake
And maybe spend another day
(If dreams were life..I'd pray) Heroeens and movie stars
Predicated as you are
Network porno kings and queens
Tragedy clipped from a magazine
Giving up a taste
The night time's hours away
There's so much time to waste Today I take a stand
Wielding remoted hand
(But don't get me wrong
If dreams were life..I'd pray)
I'd kneel and say
(Keyboard in hand)
The things I've meant to say
Yea, if dreams were life I'd pray
Perhaps some other day
Something good is on
And after that another one
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