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Topic: This Isn't Funny
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NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 23, 2008 02:18 PM
T,yeah this is all recent. I started this thread just to write things out as I've been feeling them lately. No real purpose other than that really. Anyone is welcome to add to it. IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 26, 2008 01:39 PM
Nice, Nosis IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 05, 2008 11:20 PM
Ah!Thanks, Mel! IP: Logged |
Quinnie Moderator Posts: 830 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 10, 2008 06:01 AM
Hi Nosis I can tell you have a similar curiosity to me! Love your style. Have you done any creative writing workshops?IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 10, 2008 10:27 PM
Quinnie! Thank you! What curiosity do you mean? I'm not sure I get your meaning, specifically. I've not gone to any workshops really. My first love was drawing and I'm going for a Bachelors in Fine Arts but I've always loved to write as well. I've always had a great love for words and playing with them comes quite naturally. I share them here at LL to help show myself and also in the hopes of finding other people to share, communicate and further our creativities along the way. Please feel free to let yourself be here! You won't be ignored. I may take some time to respond now and then (because of schoolwork) but I will definitely respond. IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 11, 2008 12:23 AM
W(I)e Can Speak to AngelsThere is a life for me Beyond the wounded absence And the pain that harbors in it. Whatever is that essence? Lord? Whatever is that knowledge? It was never explained enough, No! Not to satisfaction. We all know many things And may search for more, and deeper, But what this is Is no more unveiled Than the coming of the Reaper. Oh! Pain, You lively wakener, We often do invite you! And such a leech you may become For exits don't become you! Lord? I often have become a stench Of writhing, bitter bile But Lord! Oh Lord! Oh help me press this essence To the ground... "No. Let go. Just let it float on by. The effort is your own abode: Your composed lullaby. Beseech the Help of helps unto Your silver love of gold And watch it all arrest and soothe All that you do not know." Oh. Uh... Oh. Oh! Thank you!!! IP: Logged |
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posted March 11, 2008 12:42 AM
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Quinnie Moderator Posts: 830 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 11, 2008 05:20 AM
By curiosity I mean making sense of in between the lines and to the idea that some subjects aren't poetic. do you know what I mean? It could be because you study art (another appreciation i have) and it makes you look at still life and inanimate objects differently and thats maybe transferred to your overall thought perspectiveIP: Logged |
Quinnie Moderator Posts: 830 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 11, 2008 05:41 AM
Truth cannot be possessed I Loved this one Nosis, very much a belief of mine and I wrote something similar about thoughts being fleeting and not the truth becuase they only of the moment.There is a spiritual flavour to your poems that you owe to yourself to explore.Who knows you could end up channeling something from your past life IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 11, 2008 10:06 AM
Thank you, Quinnie.
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NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 11, 2008 10:48 AM
Yes, I know exactly what you mean. This perspective has its luster but it can also be detrimental. In my youth I had a very highly idealized view of life and I spent most of my time daydreaming a lot. There's plenty of good in that but there comes a time when a person must see the reality of the world if they want to be a relative force upon it. I have grown and progressed much (with still a way to go) and throughout that growth I nearly lost this quality which you've noticed. A fraction of it still remains within my art. It's difficult to see the world for what it is and still maintain the sight of what it could be. That, however, is our destiny. "Truth cannot be possessed", yes. I'm sure someone else has written this same sentiment before because I'm certain I've read it somewhere. I wrote this in response to a post I read here in LL that made me react inside. This site does that a lot for me. I read a lot of posts that make me think and feel intensely and I often write a lot of things as a product. Your "spritual" comment is uplifting and a bit ironic. I've tried very hard in the past to write with "spiritual flavour" and failed in that respect. No matter how hard I tried my writing was always purely personal and there contained, but there were fragments here and there that were the seeds. I see what you mean about these poems here. I didn't try to do anything but to lay down exactly what I feel and this is the strongest sense of "something" that I think I've ever captured. All from nOthing. Thank you so much for responding and sharing. These are the kinds of exchanges that have always helped me here at LL. Blessings, IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 11, 2008 10:56 AM
Trinity?Father, Is there anything That You do not know? I've wondered That, Perhaps, Because if there was A single thing - Why would that then Be blasphemous? Many say That there is naught Beyond that which You know And many say That Faith is spayed If this were not just so. I've wondered, Pa, About this much 'Cause I don't think it wrong. If Your Image was My template, Then What harm could there be done? Come on, Dad. Confess. I know you must ask Mom. IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Newflake Posts: 8 From: ON Canada Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 11, 2008 01:43 PM
I love writing through things. I haven't written since before I was pregnant!I used to write my wrongs and troubles and wanderings. I'd love to get to a place where I wander with words instead of wondering the wonder of them. Thanks for your meanderings IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 12, 2008 12:26 PM
You're most welcome, pixelpixie! Your confession here reminds me of the waves of these emotional waters. That wandering will come again soon. I thoroughly enjoy it each time because of how alive it makes me feel. I can only imagine how difficult life can get through motherhood but, within it, you are writing the kinds of poems that could only be dreamt of until realized. Cheers to you, oh greatest poet! IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 12, 2008 06:56 PM
WherepersonI'm turning into... myself? Of course! Of course it is... I mean...I am! There is no other product For this intricate equation. Anything I do Is everything I am! Don't mind the moments sitting In confusing confrontation... Some often love to say, "That's not you, dear. You're taller than that." Their measurement, though, Is yet another mask Confining all behind it's task. We can measure, though, Can't we? Now just what's the flaw in that? I'm not writing of the elements Involved in constitutions! This is all about unraveling This wholly warped illusion! Don't... You... Get it?!?! How can whatever I just did Not be me? I am whoever just did it And, even now, I'm he. Of course, I should concede That I am not what I did But we both know That's not really how you meant it. IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Newflake Posts: 8 From: ON Canada Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 12, 2008 09:59 PM
*claps*IP: Logged |
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posted March 12, 2008 10:42 PM
* here are some good links: Who Am I (have yet to read this fully, maybe it's time) http://www.tamilnation.org/sathyam/east/ramana/ramana.htm http://www.arunachala-ramana.org/whoami.htm http://davidgodman.org/rteach/whoami1.shtml Just had a strong urge to pass this info along to you. Great writings. (i know, like you dont have enough reading to do already. ) IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 17, 2008 10:32 AM
AutopotencyThrough these eyes No one else may see. Through these eyes Lies no one else but me. In all my looking Outward at the world, In all my seeking Lavished of my being, There have been turns Upon that songbird's tune That spiraled near And faced its wings within. O, Vision! What an angel! By your gifts do you expose The beauty of visages, Both ours and those of God, But your self is so disposed To lie in shadows of these loves. We only know to use you In the way that is ordained, Though, if suffused by your own precious gift, How would one fare your flame? IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 17, 2008 10:34 AM
Thanks, pixie and 26.I'll be checking out those links when I have more time. IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 17, 2008 05:28 PM
Solvent (A Poem on Writing Poetry)A writing in eccentria? A rushing of the sword? It pours and conjugates my soul. I lather in its oil. What frequency is mattered By this instant act of freedom? Oh, do not negate my liberty With dateless ideation! I know where thoughts do go As I so often trace their paths - And curious is everything as Nothing is writ in stone. No? I tell you I am free in this! This is no circus act! This writing's but a passenger Of what I here confess! There is no contradiction Nor any truthless thing. This writing's but a passenger of what my heart does sing. So what's this fine surprise In which my soul is so invested? This forming of some triggered words And some that cause congestion? Is it fervor? Inspiration? Or perhaps just perturbation? I am not a servant! I am no miscreant! I am the answers to my questions. IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 30, 2008 11:12 PM
It's Not a Question to MeI am an Ego. I am an I. An Ego eyes in me. My Ego sees The I I am, The sound of what is me. Not what there might, Nor what there could Nor what there seems to be - But what my Ego does now see Is what my will will be. So give them peace And love them so For they are jewels of Love. Like Fëanor's blesséd silmarils, Egos are crafts above The crafts of any humankind. They preserve the primeval grove. See yourself for what you are For as you are am I. Egos alight in all of us - A brilliant inner sky - And as you will, I may well not Be as willing to subdue it. I am wont to fuel my Ego, This living coal of Spirit, And I shall feed this hearth with song. I ripen in its resin.
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posted March 30, 2008 11:27 PM
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NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 30, 2008 11:43 PM
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NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 13, 2008 01:48 PM
A Question of TrespassesA question well worth posing, Though difficult to ask: Is there such a thing as excessive Forgiveness? For what good is the result Of all our graceful interaction And the purpose in our confrontation If it all fell in flat dimension? To forgive! All must be given this chance! Oh, so hard it is! 'Tis difficult to set free our valid reasons For not forgiving. Forgive and Forget - That's what many have adopted. Who really carries forth as such? It seems so impossibly practical. I can't hardly be alone, Let alone one of a few, That has trouble with forgiving And much more so with forgetting. I can forgive to an extent And, yes, there does exist a gamut That tells of what my Soul's strength may Or may not endure by fractions. It seems that much is surely lost, When speaking in generalizations, That often sets our Minds in spells Of absent-minded thinking. The irony of that! One surely has to laugh! Yet seldom does the joke impact Its audience with alarm For quickly do the Minds fall back Into the spells so seamlessly. It's not that we are dumb Nor that there is no hope. Perhaps this is a process by Which all must undergo? A list of steps to undertake Entrenched in Universal code? We all have heard of many ways To reach the summit of the mountain But, certainly, our path ahead Is traversed by our own walking. "We should do this and not do that" Is the condition of experience, Though hardly do we ever know Until we're through the fear of it. That sound advice that's ever-wise (Forgive and keep forgiving) Is not a law but an aspiration. Some things are unforgivable. I judge and try not to forget Both my experiences And my humanity. IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 149 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 28, 2008 10:42 PM
Living in White GypsumHow can you know all the answers When you don't even know all the questions? Perhaps the taste of sorbet Has finally found a forte? Indulgence, semi-sweet And promulgated openly, Is twice more the sword Than most have thought And ever knew to harness. Every question has a story And its ending is no answer So throw the throne over the thrown. Make gold of all the plaster. IP: Logged |