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Topic: Just friends?
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Charlotte
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From: USA
Registered: Apr 2004
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posted April 18, 2008 03:26 AM
 
 My heart lies shattered and seeks to redeem That freshly tilled garden of soulful dreams Shards and slivers of it there in the soil Flooded with tears, roots torn from earth to spoil
You came on strong, like a wild fiery wind
Hot and caressing words that scorched my skin I gave freely with no expectations Sating desire with sweet affirmations
Smoothing creases from your complexity
Emotions raw with pure perplexity I thought it was I, I guess it was you Insecurities blinded me from truth
Love unconditional, it’s just my way
Luminescent heat, here in my cache I could wield words and wound as I have been No, not with words, but with actions therein
To forgive, I know that it is divine
Therefore, I have, it’s there in my design Just friends, is that how this story will be? Don’t You know you’ve lost all, if you lose me?
©Charlotte Rose Hamby
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26taurus
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From: *
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted April 18, 2008 04:09 AM
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Charlotte
Knowflake Posts: 1838
From: USA
Registered: Apr 2004
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posted April 18, 2008 04:21 AM
26taurus, THANK YOU!
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fieryscales
Moderator Posts: 1159
From: My own private world
Registered: Jan 2008
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posted April 18, 2008 07:36 AM
 Lovely piece, thank you.IP: Logged |
Charlotte
Knowflake Posts: 1838
From: USA
Registered: Apr 2004
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posted April 18, 2008 10:40 AM
fieryscales, Thank You! 
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Heart--Shaped Cross
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From: 11/6/78 11:38am Boston, MA
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted April 18, 2008 10:52 AM
Impressive and beautiful. 
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Charlotte
Knowflake Posts: 1838
From: USA
Registered: Apr 2004
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posted April 18, 2008 03:37 PM
Heart--Shaped Cross,
Hugs filled with love for ya'
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Pearlty
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Registered: Nov 2006
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posted September 06, 2008 12:16 PM
I don't know how I missed this one...it's so expressive and warm...Charlotte...such a lovely and gifted writer you are..  IP: Logged |
ListensToTrees
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From: UK
Registered: Jul 2005
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posted September 06, 2008 05:19 PM
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charmainec
Moderator Posts: 577
From: S.A
Registered: Dec 2007
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posted September 07, 2008 03:16 PM
Absolutely beautiful...------------------
What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us ~Ralph Waldo Emerson IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 27065
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted September 10, 2008 10:26 AM
Love it.------------------
"Don't worry about the world coming to an end today. It's already tomorrow in Australia." Charles Schultz IP: Logged |
lotusheartone
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posted September 11, 2008 12:00 PM
Charlotte, you are amazing! All my love, with all my heart
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Charlotte
Knowflake Posts: 1838
From: USA
Registered: Apr 2004
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posted December 18, 2008 03:22 AM
awww
Jen,LTT,Charmainec,Randall :-)'s,Lotus...
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D for Defiant
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Registered: May 2006
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posted December 24, 2008 09:04 PM
Charlotte,This is absolutely beautiful! I am touched. It feels like deep longing being expressed almost melodiously, if that makes sense... D IP: Logged |
Charlotte
Knowflake Posts: 1838
From: USA
Registered: Apr 2004
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posted December 28, 2008 06:58 PM
D, it makes perfect sense...Hugs and thank you! IP: Logged |
raven1812
Knowflake Posts: 40
From: Nashville, TN
Registered: Oct 2008
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posted January 08, 2009 05:12 AM
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Life's too short. Live lively! :-)
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Charlotte
Knowflake Posts: 1838
From: USA
Registered: Apr 2004
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posted January 10, 2009 06:20 AM
Raven... IP: Logged |
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