Posts: 814
From: UK
Registered: Jan 2008

posted August 05, 2008 10:02 AM         

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Big feet like flippers
Screws in your shoes
To keep them longer
Because you like them.

A gap in your front teeth
When your bridge crumbled
Did not embarrass you.

If I miss you
I wear my green skirt
And you arrive
Always, like
Mork calling Orson.

Come in Neptune
This is Mercury, over.

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Registered: Nov 2006

posted August 05, 2008 12:22 PM         

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Nice!! Great Metaphor "Mork Calling Orson"

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From: south africa
Registered: Dec 2007

posted August 07, 2008 06:27 AM         

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What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us ~Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Registered: Dec 2005

posted August 08, 2008 03:11 AM         

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wicked awesome

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From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted August 08, 2008 09:04 AM         

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I LOVE IT!!!! (No I didn't accidentally hit caps lock.)

More! More!

Nicely done.

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